I
pulled every muscle in my stomach
and flat chest,
and clogged
every drain
with the vicious lies I gobbled up
about how I'd
"still be beautiful"
if I ate like you told me to.
Author notes
sorry if this isn't what you were looking for! =\
♥
crash
In a list
A contest entry
- fragile. ♥ by love tank x.
950 points, ended January 26, 2007, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Only for "A Broken Group Of People" "Glitter Glam Whores" "A Glitter Scarred Mascara Teared Group" And those on my favorites or who have me on their favorites by Dead Star--x.
450 points, ended March 13, 2007, 27 entries
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short and sweet but i still liked it.
about how I'd
"still be beautiful"
if I ate like you told me to.
how many times do those words come from the people around us-they dont quite get it.
thanx for entering baby doll ♥
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The last thing a sufferer of an eating disorder needs is someone telling them how to eat or what to eat. You've managed to compile your sad emotions on the subject into a short poem, which I find is difficult. I find each line was written wonderfully
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wow now this is really a great written piece of poetry!!! i reall y loved this so much!!! one that anyone can read over and over again and feel as though they are reading for the first time.
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[haha, I like your username!]
Thanks for reading, and for the comment!!
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i loved this.
the ending was amazing.
you are amazing.
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This knocked me back
And made me feel empty
But it was so beauitful
I've never read anything as small with as much power
I could relate and see everything
It is amazing
Good luck in the contest
You hit the nail on the head
I should really get back on track with my eating
But I don't want to....
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thanks for reading hunny
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wowing
i like your title with the pice. it gives it more of a personal pain of your feelings. your words are direct and bold, not holding any punches. great write. i'm going to explore more of your world. stay strong. live long.
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thanks so much for reading this and for commenting =]
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very powerful~loved it!
~Helen
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Oh no, this is exactly what I'm looking for hun!
"about how I'd
"still be beautiful"
if I ate like you told me to."
Too bad it isn't that^^ easy, huh? This is amazing. Short yet so beautiful. Great job! Thanks for entering
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have fun judging!
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angel, eat ♥
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darling.
I love this.
It's so short
but god I know how you feel.
I love you doll face.
and you're beautiful no matter what<3
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thanks babe! <333
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aw loveyyy. this is sooo sad.
I love you to bits and pieces.
this fucking world is trying to swallow us all whole, but baby I'm here for you. <3 -
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aww thank you danielle-love. ♥
I'm gonna you to death.
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<3 Go crash.
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heheh <3
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