Banish your ever-solemn thoughts into oblivion.
Your own personal demon is there,
to greet you upon arrival.
Such a gorgeous queen, Aphrodite,
intensify the growing crease
and deliver us from sanity.
So what if every lie you told
was an absolute truth?
Who, but a child could say any different?
Why do you deny that you’re only a pitiful tease?
Satan's pathetic attempt at redemption.
“Oh, but I’m so fucking hard x [CORE]!”
Whore please,
you’re just shooting a blank and you know it.
What boy in their right mind would dare press lips
and kiss away your sins?
Go on,
pretend to cry,
and trace lines in your arm,
to the beat of your tears falling.
Drape a dark green veil over your
neon blue eyes
The hidden message filled masque was too much,
wasn’t it?
Color in the little red spots under your cheeks
and across your neck
hide inside your mind,
nonexistent.
Come on let’s play,
I’ll be the predator,
you’ll be the prey.
So fall on your knees
the place you’ve become accustomed to,
and mock me with all your might.
I may need leather straps to hold you in place,
just for tonight, pinkie promise.
Nitpick out the quotes you find
ever-so helpful.
Girl please, you’re such a bore.
Native tongue, of such wondrous Norse,
who could of thought of faking them self for you?
Why are you so different from the world, Gorgeous?
Asinine wonders,
and don’t remember to breathe.
With my asp slowly curving around
your pleasantly perfect body
you’ll be twisted, askew
into thinking my eyes are your kingdom
possibly a save-haven.
Dear, dear, Aphrodite,
you sold your heart
the biggest price to pay
for a few ounces of thought.
Nero can’t save you now,
astrophysics are on my side
an army of nothing,
and we always win.
When your brain is spilled out onto the floor
guess who won’t be laughing anymore.
Author notes
"Cannibal Corpse"
A contest entry
- Pretty Little Rag Doll. by yesterdaysfeelings-.
750 points, ended June 15, 2007, 81 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Gore laced Insanity by Synthetic-Nightmare.
750 points, ended July 9, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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wOW
This was definitely very interestingly written. It was quite a read, great use of words, it kept it intersting.....kudos and good luck in the contest!
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I hold many of those and they do consume my mind like many. I like the last couple of stanzas the best. Thanks for entering this for me.
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Wow, this was really harsh. I would hate to be on the recieving end of something so black. Pressing the go upainst the curb. I really liked this line:
"So what if every lie you told was an absolute truth"
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It wasn't really aimed at one person in particular. More or less, it was attacking all the people around me that say retarded stuff. A bit of it was aimed at myself as well. I had to let a lot of stuff out and it just sort of happened. Word vomit in a sense.
Thanks for your comment.
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