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Drums

It's this consistent rattling
Up inside of my reeling head
It goes on for never ending hours
And continues while I lie in bed

It's this unstoppable rage;
That I can't help but labor under;
It devotedly keeps pounding
"Where did this come from," I wonder

It's not irrational
This a vicious demon inside;
I cannot control it no longer!
And so now we both collide;

Without cease;
This pain goes on;
Uninterruptedly
The painful drums keep goin on;




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  • unforsakenightmare
    April 4, 2007

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    its telling me that you have thoughts in your head..that are getting to you and they wont go away and its getting to you and causing you this major pain. but other than that this is a amazing poem