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For you.

For you I will go the mile for you I will walk that trial for you I will never go away. For you the sins I pay for you the love will stay for you my hart is true for you my will never brake. For you it’s never fare for you I will live for you I will die for you all this and more in you’re hart and ever more. 

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  • Tali28
    June 16, 2007

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    Awesome emotions and love here. I really like this write. Who ever they are they are lucky to have you i their life. Keep up the good work. Good luck in the contest. Take care.
    Tali


  • Travis7
    June 15, 2007

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    this poem is really awesome i really really really really really really really really like it. it's cool you have are a great poet and all of your poems are awesome i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    good luck in the contest
    GOOD JOB


  • Tali28
    June 3, 2007
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    Thanks

    Thanks for your entry. When the contest ends I will comment more.
    Tali


  • Blissful Melody
    January 21, 2007
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    Pretty!!

    This is really sweet Slash. I like it. She's lucky..