remembering when i was a little girl...
all the times you fixed my hair
all the hugs that meant the world
i thought you would always be there
remembering when i was a little older
everytime you made me smile
when i cried i had your shoulder
i didn't know i was going to losee you in a little while
remembering when i thought i was old enough
all the times you put up with me
but you lilstened to all my childish stuff
i didnt know He was going to set you free
remembering when you were laying in that bed
thinking of allthe happy times
all of them flashing through my head
i'd give anything just to hear your voice,
just to see you smile, just to feel the warmth of your skin
i have to let you go
but it is so hard to do so
i used to ask god why
why did he let you die
he took you for a reason
i have to accept that you are gone
i have to say good bye
even if letting go makes me ....
Author notes
i wrote this for my grandmother. she passed this past july and i miss her so much. she was my mother....
A contest entry
- mothers day poems by x Bright Eyes x.
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Im sorry for your loss...good luck for the contest
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Im so sorry for your loss but you did her memory proud with this write.
Well done
Thanks for entering and good luck
Raker -
loved the describtion of this also the imagery thank you for entering and i wish you good luck take care
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omg... i am so sorry you lost this person... Is it your mother? newayz... wow... i loved it... you put a lot of passion into this piece.
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it was my grandmother... she passed...
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