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Hear me out.

Hear me out
if its not perfect
i'll perfect it,
and if it doesn't work out
then fine lets just be friends.
But for now,
let's risk it.
DOn't scream,don't doubt,
just for now, trust me.
You told me you love me,
and i feel the same too,
let's be more than friends,
what have we got to lose?

Please tell me what you think

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  • Goddess of illusion
    January 19, 2007

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    Nemises... Touching write...

    I hear the plea in this, and it makes one wonder why everything in life has to be so complicated, when it can be so simple and easy...

    Keep that pen flowing, with ink that never fade...

    Elmarie


    • Nemisis
      January 19, 2007
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      Thanks Elmarie

      Yea i guess it's just human to over complicate things, coz it seems we all do it The poem i wrote sort of more to convince myself to give it a shot and not be drawn back by fear... or something like that. Seems sometimes i don't even understand myself haha, no wonder no one else does. Thanks for the lovely comment you gave, it's apreciated.