Kills without mercy
no intention to stop.
Drink all the blood
until the last single drop.
Runs without tire
in the darkness so pure.
The sickness I posses
does not have a cure.
Wihtin lies a demon
its origins unknown.
The need to be free
has steadily grown.
He appears in the dark
when I am alone.
No power I have to stop him,
as I have been shown.
Claws taking over
eyes growing fierce.
Fur as black as night
teeth sharp enough to pierce.
Paws flying over ground
wihtout looking back.
Only thing in mind
is his next attack.
Preditor at heart
my demon inside.
Seeks to suplunt me
but still on my side.
A contest entry
- when passion is enough by KeeperOfTheNight.
600 points, ended March 28, 2007, 15 entries
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Silver trophy winner
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i love how you gave it a hunter like personality it really gives it substance. makes it real. i love it.
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This poem was great. I loved it! It had a great flow and theme I guess you would call it. Lol. Thank you for this entry and good luck!
Megan -
this is s great poem and its full of creativity and imagination. thank you for a great entry in my contest.
great write...
Dark -
"Claws taking over
eyes growing fierce.
Fur as black as night
teeth sharp enough to pierce.
Paws flying over ground
wihtout looking back."
Was my favorite part... good job and thanks for entering my contest. -
very good poem the imagery and verything its very good i like it good luck in the contest
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'S coo. Me like.
-Thorn (Rosie....)
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They are always on our side.... a good poem
Sincerely,
Shadow
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