Dear God
Grant me the acceptance to change
the things that destroy my strength
but if not,
grant me enough
red wine to accelerate
my slight intoxication
to dreamless oblivion.
Over and out,
Annie
A contest entry
- Surprise Me by Fall.Of.Rome.
900 points, ended February 3, 2007, 17 entries
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The strange thing about this poem is that I'm not really into god or prayers but I really enjoyed reading it... You did a good job on this one! greetz, melo.
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Thanks Melo... and neither am I...
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*smile*
That just made me smile this morning, and I liked it a lot. Nice work. So visible. ~Pam
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Oh shit sweets, I've only seen this one now! Its brilliant!!! Dont we but all feel like this sometime... I am so sorry that you are running out of 'wine'...
Hang in there my friend, things will get better, with or without the juices!!!
Love you lots!!!
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I tried to remove the poem, but couldn't. It appears as if only you can do it at this point, so please do so when you have a moment.
Thanks,
Analize -
If you had read any other poems containing religious content, you might have realized I loathe religion. I probably should have specified that in the contest. But this screams out against everything I believe. Therefore, I don't really like it. Sorry.
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LOL love this , love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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