Don't call me when you're drunk
After you've been out on the binge
Whispering sweet nothing's to me
Makes my insides cringe
Go sober up
Stick your fingers down your throat
Thinking I'll have sex with you
Makes me want to choke
Come down of your drugs
Blow that powder from your nose
All of that snivelling down the phone
Is really quite gross
Please stop repeating yourself
And behaving like a dick
Cause the thought of you these days
Makes me feel rather sick
Erase my number completely
Remove those images from your head
Get your kicks from someone else
And slur to them instead
You're no longer my Nice One Ed
Author notes
This is a dedication to my ex who would phone ever so often for fun and frolics! This was a hard process of getting over him because I still loved him while he just missed the sex! I finally came to my senses and said NO!
A contest entry
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475 points, ended February 14, 2008, 23 entries
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If you ended it at "And slur to them instead," it would have made the most powerful impression on me. I could relate to those feelings of disgust that you described. Thanks for entering my contest!
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simple and to the point and ive forwarded this to a bunch of my friends I love it I wish we were fuccing hahaha just kiddin
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I hope your friends enjoyed it as much as you did. Thanks for commenting again, you've just made my day!
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nice
i definently know where that is coming from and i have felt the same way so many times.
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Wonderful
I really liked this a lot. This was straight to the point. It was direct, imagery so strong, the rhyme and rhythim wa strong in this as well. Keep writing. You got talent. :
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Thank you for your kind words. Hope all is well.
Katey
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Geezers like that do my Ed in! Be a good answer fone msge for a lot of girlies me thinks. Keep it up honey.
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Good bit of wit in this comment!!! Definately does do my ED in!!! Thanks for my applause and making me giggle. x
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I like this. I think everybody knows that guy you talked about! You have a really nice style of writing - simple yet effective. It reminds me a little of my own style. Much enjoyed!
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Thank you for you nice words. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'll look forward to reading some of your work.
Katey
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amazing stuff................x
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Thankyou. x
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whoa
simple, to the point and great, well done, this is a good write, and really gets across the disgust you can feel for someone when they're slurring at you, especially when they've woken you up to do it. Nice write, well done. =D
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You know that! Thank you for your comment.
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