Take a journy with me into the forest, through the mountians, and across the ocean into the sea of grey where everything is all but what it is, the only constant things are dichotomy, hypocricy and truth, as we enter the web of knowledge we leave behind ignorance and judgement for wisdom.
Enter into the conflict of collective choice.
A contest entry
- If You Want Comments... by RT michaels.
335 points, ended February 13, 2007, 106 entries
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I love the imagery!
Angie
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well...
interesting if a bit terse. The style tends to force a bit of bumpiness where it should flow smoother, or so it felt to me. Good imagery and use of vocabulary, however. -
test
*coffe*
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