scattered thoughts with ragged edges
a kaliediscope of hopes and dreams
quiet conversation over truckstop coffee
the soft fading background of life
a moment of stolen time ...shared
laughter rippling through a heart
memories made and not forgotten
the feel of my hand in yours
the taste of bittersweet departure
longing for wishes fulfilled
tears spent but not wasted
love returned embraced...acknowledged
Please tell me what you think
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Two years ago I talked of a deadly sin, and now it isnt even there! It must be you reworked. Otherwise, i must have lost my mind, huh? This speaks to the burden of hopes and dreams. I think if we could just accept what is... we might find more contentment. This feels like a meeting in a truckstop. Long time no see. Glad you dropped by. Are you saying Im getting better?
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it's beautiful. brings back memories my love, great write so full of love and feeling.
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This is very tight and pensive; most impressed. "Deadly sin" has a good point. Come by and see some of my new stuff. I lost my dad... "At Christmas". Did real well hunting. I took a 195lb 16"spread 7 point and a 14" 8 point across the street from my home, 500 ft from my front door.
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this is very well written and very deep...hope that you get what you looking for!!
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Such a beautiful piece here.....written so perfectly and proved to be a joy to read....smiles, Terry
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Wow, this is really good. I love some of the imagery in it, it's really beautiful. But, may I suggest something? Try swapping some of the words around e.g. instead of the taste of bittersweet departure try the bittersweet taste of departure. That's what I'd do, but I'm rather strange so... haha
Anyway, really enjoyed it.
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