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Wor[l]d Weaver

 

“Wor[l]d weaver we would know what may transpire
when Chronos_fears unravel on our earth.
Will waitress Time serve course with dainties, lyre
rewiring tastebuds with sweet morsels ?  tire,
no second servings dish ? doors closed, expire ?
close restaurant, avaunt, as if birth – berth
is/was spun bill of lading, - pre-paid buyer
obliged, wait_tressed, to pun de_sire ?
Will waft and weft swift smoke in final fire,
or will we wait, like mammoths, for rebirth,
within ice walls sung by no phantom choir,
lost, silent, windless, sunless too, our worth
our empires under rock of ages' mire ? "


“Light years spun long before the minds of men
climbed through primaeval slime to seed the stars -
to open up far universe again.
Dice walls or calls the stakes, gives, takes, or mars
when cycles turn Fate's wheel, when nothing bars
intelligence renascent, - beings then
may lodestars search or perch on Shangri Las.
Beaux-arts may flourish, while noteworthy pen
might music rediscover, strange sitars
send notes afloat on timelessness suspen-
ding Time itself, once more feed hours
and powers the heady appetite empowers
to choose the course it views upon life’s MEN
YOU – only you – may taste, may waste, till when
wheel turns in haste, bill paid, and fade the flowers.”


"Wor[l]d weaver one would well your lore inquire.
What can become of all our storied mirth,
our idle chatter, dreams, ambitions higher,
our generations' aims and prayers entire,
imaginations vivid, poets’ lyre ?”
Should one feed now? How choose? when whine lists’ worth

may rancid ransom prove, a thorny briar.
Should we treat Maître D to trust as Sire,
or, tricked, of course off course, t[h]read into gyre
whose tipple ripple – pointed Fate’s denyer –
may earn return, new menu’s venu, dearth
or plenty find behind mind’s blind rebirth ?”

“Should, mad, mankind continue as today
to overcrop, to overfish, disdain
the seasons’ reasons, - all that may remain
could well be drowned beneath reef’s swirling spray
as tipping points are reached. No time to pray
may soon be found as poles melt, greed for grain
encouraging pollution, won’t restrain
equations which imbalance interplay
in ways all may regret with needless pain.
No fire, no ice, no cities, no ex…plain.
No restrooms, silver settings, crystal. Chain
reactions sweep both waiter, wait away.
Dessert is served in some Bagdad café
as carpetbagger man’s precocious reign
turns paradise to desert by the way …”


Author notes

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Chronos_fears or Chronospheres ?

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  • james119
    September 14, 2008

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    It's a well woven challenge you've given here, both in wordplay and in philosophy. I concur with the comments below, to the dot. The commentary is not lost on the reader, nor is the depth to anyone caring to sound it.

    I don't know the name of the style, but have enjoyed it before. Thanks much for entering.


  • MelodiousDreaming
    April 25, 2008

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    It completely sucked me in, fantastic wording, complex, skillful, actually I haven't the faintest idea what to say. You've left me breathless, well done!


  • lechap
    April 24, 2008

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    Well done

    I like the word play. Great use of random punctuation. I loved the use of greek and roman mythology, especially cause you used the names from booth. The renaissance ideology of the wheel of fate worked well too. Whether intentional or not, nice allusion to Twain in the ending lines. I liked the first set best. Very---- creative use of punctuation.


  • Maili Knephthan gold member
    April 14, 2008

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    While I found it a little difficult to concentrate on it (my bipolar doesn't allow for along attention span) I did force myself to read it from top to bottom. It was a very deep write and I really like it alot. Good job Thank you for sharing it with us


  • Minorchar
    February 3, 2007

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    Very deep and intritcate. I wouldn't know yet how to go about critiquing this, but it's powerful adn well-written nevertheless. Great job.

  • Thankful
    February 3, 2007

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    i am a new reader and writer, your poem really got me to pay attention to the words that our written under the poem i liked it. It made me want to learn more about the meaning of words. thank you.

  • marrow
    February 2, 2007
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    first of all, thank you for your entry in my contest.
    this poem actually reminds me of the ways that the greek epics are written-- or perhaps i have just read too much illiad this week.

    either way, thank you for your effort and best of luck to you.
    j


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    January 24, 2007

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    You are the intricate weaver of words and phrases, my poet-pen. I recognize some of this in how we communicate. The themes run deep and meaningful, the thoughts are womven with mine. Well done!


  • klassy lassy
    January 19, 2007
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    Perhaps the answer to this plight
    speaks not of tongue but second sight,
    for all that's born of dust is dust,
    apires not to Spirit's trust.
    Unfolding Spirit to display,
    the walls of China blow a way.

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