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Stalker Love (acrostic with no secret clue)

Intrusive
Narcissistic
Folly,
Afflicted,
Tormented,
Unnatural
Addiction
To
Idealized
Objectified
Need.


Author notes

Let's just say that this was inspired by several poems I saw today, and they shall remain unnamed. If the shoe fits...

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  • Arzab
    May 18, 2007

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    Good write. Good descriptions of how some stalkers can be. I had a stalker back in the Spring who approached me at the library one day and said he had seen me some time before there and I thought that was weird and then he kept showing up around where I hung out and he wanted to be my boyfriend, but I didn't feel the same way. Just a reminder that there are some strange people out there. i also wrote a song about it about a month ago. I thought this piece was good and like how you chose a different word for the acrostic other than the title of the piece. Keep writing.

  • DevilDoll
    March 13, 2007

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    lol. Cool poem! I can certainly relate to this one, because I have a real life stalker at the moment, who comes into my work to harass me on a regular basis. He inspired one of my poems, actually! This was great though, I loved your word choice throughout.
  • Lullabyhaven
    February 18, 2007
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    This One

    Makes me LOL


  • Amera gold member
    January 19, 2007

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    Interesting you old bastard; I am impressed that you included many of your own traits, well done. It is unusual that an acrostic has a different title than the acronym. What really astounded me was the misspelling of the acrostic its self unless Inftuation is another coined word. Also; acrostic is spelled with one "c". Love, the Bitch

    • Fire N Ice
      January 19, 2007
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      LMFAO!!!!

      WOW!!!!!
      Al, she sure told you!!!

    • PerVirtuous Allan gold member
      January 19, 2007

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      Dearest Bitch:

      I truly appreciate you helping to save me from looking like a hack, at least until they read your comments, anyways. There is no excuse for sloppiness. By the way, the word is "itself". To say "its self", is archaic as you would normally use an apostrophe to assign possession, but don't want to confuse with the contraction of "it is".

      Bastard

  • radical24
    January 19, 2007
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    hehehehhehehhehe a good approach to writing....keep on going...best, radical

  • Fire N Ice
    January 19, 2007
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    LMFAO!!!!!!!!

    Al, you just crack me up!!!!!!

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