Breathing out on a chill winter's day,
enjoying the clean and crisp air.
Wondering at all of nature's beauty,
perambulating without a care.
Suddenly, a sense of horror.
My female companion looked and gasped.
There at the end of my aquiline nose,
something began to quiver.
Well, I was aghast!
A shiny air-filled membrane,
glistened in the setting sun.
Wet and full of snot;
Growing......
It ballooned out of all proportion.
Thank goodness I had a tissue,
and popped the offending mess...
but not before my lady friend
had puked up down her dress.
Author notes
Bubbles bubbles bubbles.
I appreciate it's not pretty. If you dq me I'll do a pretty one. x But I'd rather you didn't!
A contest entry
- Bubble Mania by Lyre-Bird-.
400 points, ended January 25, 2007, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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HAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You have taken bubble and given it a vision of reality..... lol... snot
This is good....
Thank you for entering and goodluck
Tracey
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LOl, I think we have all had those embrassing moments. Thank god you had a tissue! Too bad for her dress. Intresting poem, very vivid and flow was great! ~Sie
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I hope...
I hope that this doesn't get DQ'd (Dairy Queened...ha, ha) because it's very funny, though... I must admit, somewhat gross. My fave lines would have to be: Thank goodness I had a tissue/And popped the offending mess/But not before my lady friend/had puked up down her dress. Great work. Good luck in the contest.
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with this offering you've given this contest justice!!!!!!!!!!
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this is absolutly disgusting but in a wonderful way. i never thought a poem about snot bubbles could be a good one but hey you do it congratulations
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Lovely Mr.C! I wonder if my poem about putting a condom over the end of my nose and blowing would be fitting for this contest? Hmmm...probably not.
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Ew. Lol!
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Well...
This is a very interesting poem my friend... but I enjoyed it. I guess I may be weird to find humor in a topic like this one but... I do. Well great job as always
~<3~
Gabrelle
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