A son is always there
In your heart
And in your head
Your never really apart
A fathers son
Is the apple of their eye
JUst think you never
really say goodbye
So Getsbetter
My dear Friend
Cheer up
Because the love and memories
never truely end
all the best mate
raffles xx
Author notes
getsbetter i hope you cheer up soon my friend
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A contest entry
- ~Words of Love for Getsbetter~ by -Ink Artist-.
825 points, ended January 25, 2007, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ANY THING by serenity silvermoon.
430 points, ended May 10, 2007, 145 entries
Honorable mention
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i loved this poem very much i want to say you did a really great job on this i think you are a great poet and this was a great poem thanks for sharing keep that pen flowing gob bless you forever and always sign dianna lee green
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Lovely piece for gets. This was a kind gesture for a wonderful man. I'm sure he will truly appreciate it! Thanks for your entry and good luck!
~Lori
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Good write raffles, especially when it is to cheer up a friend. nice rhymes and flow. Keep the pen flowing and thanks for sharing.
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Nice Write
A nice write with tenderness.
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sweet
This was pretty good. I hope you don't take this rudly, but it seemed that you were trying to rhyme. The flow is a little off. I love what its saying though. lol Its really sweet and I'd personally love to read it again. Great job,
Ashley
ps. Its really sweet that you wrote this for a friend.
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