Each time I look into your shining eyes
My heart ignites with joyousness
This mirror
That you create in me
Where my eyes are finally opened
To True beauty;
In that miracle of reflection
I see myself in you
The smile spreading ear to ear
That you are here
Born into this very world
That we can share
Your loving kindness has opened my heart
To what IS the True beauty
Shining in your humility
Dazzling in your joyousness
You've won my heart completely
With the message that you bring
Gather me up in your magic
An if you find my eyes wandering
Create in me that thirst again
To love you ever more dearly
This is where, for me
Sweet Divinity resides
A contest entry
- rewrite a write...1 by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
425 points, ended February 11, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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very heart-touching
a very heart-touching poem filled with beauty and wisdom ...
thank you so much for sharing such a gem ...

maa

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Very beautiful.

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Indeed you are touching the beauty of the life here.. a great write is here..Thank you so much for your kind words..

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Ah, how you always gather me up in your rosebed and sing the soft song of Self to my weary ears. Sing of the breath of Life! Sing of the Love of creation within the material heart and all that flows between us. Poet, how you captivate the spiritual into the verbal and show us the love that a Master shows for the Beloved.


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AH, SUCH BEAUTY!
This is such a beautiful and loving poem. Your words take me into a dream world where only two in love can see.

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Girl, you have such a spiritual beauty that just radiates through your words ... I always feel refreshed and enlightened when I read you



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Very sweet and loving.
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its amazing how love and light can be found within another and ultimately ourselves. this is a seriously sweet poem. well penned.
Have a great day
Shanelle -
Beautiful sweet Tara. Divinity not only is found in the eyes of the beloved but also within the deeped heart of the lover as well.
Just beautiful!
Namaste!
Marianne
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