No matter where i go
I'm drowning in this Evil flow
Of Hate and Anger from Hell itself
I Fight against it to save myself
I am Hollow I'm alone
Though my Sorrow is not shown
To hide from me is Pointless now
I run from me, I'm Lost somehow
The Sorrow in me is too much to bear
The Love within me I cannot share
Truth and justice don't always prevail
For I am sick Beyond saving now
This sickness of mine is truly Unjust
The sickness is strong; the sickness is Lust
Greed, Hate, and Envy also make me sick
They break me apart as I break a stick
These sicknesses my way to Heaven
These sicknesses counted; there are Seven
My mind is Haunted
And I am Taunted
A Love I'm feeling is about to break me
The Hate I'm feeling seems to make me
And though I might seem
O.K. on the outside
They cannot see, the Rage on the inside
Dwelling within me, I cannot hide
A contest entry
- Darkest by Shiro Okami.
816 points, ended March 1, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I wrote this a while ago but i came across it from my journal and felt likke it belonged here
Comments
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This is really awesome and i could really relate to it. good job!
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This poem is no laybleed adult contest. i'm giving you 'til tomorrow to change it.
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sry about that... i fixed it
^_^
thnx
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This is very very good. I like the way you have used capitl letters at the beginnings of certain words. It is a nice touch. Well done with this.
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i really like the feel to this poem, the daunting confusion of the emotions. great imagery and rhyme
Have a great day
shanelle
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