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Broken Hearts

isnt this supposed to get better
but broken hearts
they never mend
this isnt what happiness should be
but in my life
that's what it is

cause now
i get it
cause now
i know...

[chorus]
can you feel it now
do you feel it too
this pain
it's tearing me, ripping me
in two
this pain
sincerely
from you

and even though it's come together
im moving on
im loving still
i'll never forget the lies you told
i'll never trust
it's not the same

[chorus]

the memory fades
but doesnt leave
i'll never forget
but i'll never say
i'll never fall in love
again

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  • Hales13
    January 19, 2007

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    interesting beth... i liked it... kinda sad if youthink about it.. never falling in love again and all... anywho... good job!


  • aliceramone
    January 18, 2007

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    good write...I am a songwriter and this would make a good song...thanks for entering this piece and good luck in the contest