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Patty, My Sister

No words can convey the love I hold
For one big sister so dear to me.
The day we met is the day I changed,
My life, my feelings, my heart.

I am not one to trust so easily,
To call someone my friend.
Because friend to me is a strong word
One that means I would give anything.

But Patty is a friend so true,
I will not deny this ever.
From the very start I could tell
She had was a special soul.

Thank you, Patty, for blessing me
With the honor of your friendship;
A better person I could never meet
And my anything is yours to request.

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  • pattyann4500
    January 19, 2007

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    Oh, Erin, my dearest little sister, I adore you!!!! Thank you so much for these loving words. You mean so much to me, as well, and I can't imagine not having you in my life. You're the little sister I always wanted.

    I knew we were perfect for each other, but it was even more obvious by the collaboration we recently wrote. It was so remarkable that I felt even closer to you. You are precious, and I thank you for this beautiful piece. I love you, my little one. Love, Patricia


  • General 1948
    January 19, 2007

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    awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that's so cute
    I'M SURE PATTY WILL LOVE IT (HINT HINT)


    Great poem


    General


  • Whispering Winds
    January 18, 2007

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    Oh this is so beautiful. And I know in my heart that our friend will adore this write. She is so worthy of this and so much more. Thanks for entering my contest.

    Many blessings,
    Tammy