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An Erotic, Romantic Cruise (Part THREE)

 An Erotic Romantic Cruise (Part THREE)


On the following day, Dew woke up alone in her bed. She sat upright and looked around her but Draco was neither in her room, nor in his. She got up and put on a mauve baby doll that had thin straps and was very short but not transparent. She found her man in the kitchen, at the stove! She stood transfixed, she never knew Draco could cook or even work the muggle equipment. He turned round and laid omelettes and bacon on French toast.
“Very impressive!” Dew said.
“Good morning, baby,” Draco said with a smile. He kissed her mouth and invited her to sit down.
Not only did he make a very yummy breakfast and take the load off her, but he also fed her, her toast. She enjoyed the pampering, but something made her think she was going to have to do something in return. She drank some strawberry juice and went out onto the deck. Draco followed her shortly, but he was in his boxers now.
“Where were you?” she asked.
“You’ll see.” He answered with a smirk and a blink.
“I am really enjoying this vacation.” She said after a few short minutes, then turned and kissed Draco, who smiled and kissed her back.
“Hey, I need to go to the bathroom, why don’t you follow me shortly. I’ll wait for you.” Draco said, gave her a kiss on the cheek and left.
Dew sat another couple of minutes watching the stillness of the water and its shimmering under the bright sun. Then, she left and went to her room. There she found a piece of parchment written on it: “Wear these!” and under the paper were a black underwear and bra, both slightly transparent and very sexy. The underwear was a g-string. Still not knowing what Draco had in mind, she took off her gown and put on the bra and underwear. They were a perfect fit. They cupped her breasts and revealed a bit of them but still covered her nipples. She looked in the mirror and she was amazed. The black colour was beautiful along with her white skin. To add a little extra colour, she wore red lipstick.
Just then, Draco came out of the bathroom. He began to flirt with her. He ordered her to get down on all fours. Dew eyed him for a second then did as she was told. He gently ran his hands on her back. Moving slowly and making her shiver under his fingers. Then “slap” he spanked her naked, white ass. Again, he hit her ass, and again. Every time she could feel his hand teasing her for a second then slapping her ass. With every slap, her ass got hotter and hotter. She enjoyed the feel of his hands while spanking her. After ten spanks, Draco moved and stood in front of her.
“Tell me, do you know why you have been spanked?” he asked in a husky voice.
“I guess I must have been naughty,” she said then quickly added: “Master.”
Draco smiled when she said ‘Master’ and said, “Yes you have been ‘very’ naughty. Tell me, did you enjoy it?”
Dew nodded.
Draco went down on his knees in front of her face and licked her lips but did not kiss her. She attempted to kiss him but he withdrew and shook his head. He moved to her back and began spanking her again. After another five spanks, Dew was sure her ass was red by now. And she was beginning to get hot. She wanted to undress and be naked. Just then, she felt Draco’s tongue on her ass. She let out a low but audible moan, to which she received five more spanks.
“Not a noise, and not a word unless I ask you. Clear?”
“Yes, Master.”
“Very good.” He said, and he slid off his boxers slowly, revealing his hardening manhood. He went and sat down on the bed and played with his manhood. Not looking up he told her; “Slowly undress for me. Show me what you got. Make me want you!”
As she got up, she quickly thought of she was to perform her task. She stood in front of him, and began taking off her underwear. Very slowly and very seductively, she removed it. Slowly lowering it down and bending her whole body. Her breasts were only partially visible, but Draco could clearly see the line between her breasts and the part that was outside the bra. He watched, as she got up and began touching her legs and moving up to her thighs. Then, she touched her ass and teased him with it. She –literally – put her ass in his face, then slowly turned around and began moving her hands over her bra-covered breasts. She put her hands behind her back and took off the bra. She threw it away and began touching her breasts and pinching her nipples. Now, her hands slowly touched every inch of her body. She was getting hot but held her juices. Draco noticed how her nipples kept hardening and how his manhood was as hard as a rock. ‘Damn! She’s sexy and seductive!’ he thought.

“On your knees and hands again, pretty babe!” he demanded.
Again, she silently did as she was ordered. Draco got up and began spanking her again. This time the spanks were more and were harder, and but all the more enjoyable for the both of them. Draco suddenly stopped the spanking, and began running his hand up and down her back and butt. Then, he began playing with her dangling breasts. Gently slapping them and swaying them from side to side. He moved a finger down her neck, her back into her ass. Then, he did the same on the other side: down her throat, between her breasts, down her belly and into her wet pussy.
“Hot and wet aren’t you?” he said, but was not speaking directly to her.
Dew remained silent.
“Go over to the bed and lie on your back.” He ordered.
Dew did as her handsome Master instructed. She lied down on her back. Her body was slightly sweaty and her breathing was heavy. Draco spread her legs and put a finger in her pussy. Then, another. He took both out and licked them. She tasted so good. He moved his manhood over her body, making it just touch her as he moved over her. Dew held her breath so as not to moan, and she looked the other way to prevent herself from doing anything. If he wanted to torture her, well she will give him some torture of his own. Suddenly, he thrust his manhood into her pussy and cummed in her.
“You little pretty girl, you just had to make your Master cum, didn’t you? Well, guess you won’t get any fun today.”
With his manhood still inside her body, he leaned over her and began touching her and playing with her nipples, circling them with his fingers and occasionally pinching them slightly.
“On the floor again!” he ordered.
Submissively she did. He entered her from behind and rocked her whole body. Then, he bent over her back and held onto her breasts as if milking her. He could not help but moan in ecstasy. Then, he got up and stood in front of her. She looked up at him, and he saw a sparkle in her eyes.

Suddenly, he was thrust into the wall and he felt her mouth over his manhood. She sucked on him wildly. He tried or pretended to try to push her but he did not really want to push her away. Then, it was he who submitted to her. He began asking for more and more. Ever since he had started pretending that Master thingy, he wanted her to devour him, to eat him like she always did and make him scream, and so he did!

“Sorry Master, but you provoked me! I could not hold myself much longer. I needed to taste you. I had to taste your cock!” she said while licking and attempting to bite his manhood.
“Don’t apologize, love. Just eat me. Finish me!” Draco moaned, and cummed into her mouth.
Still she licked and made him cum again. He could not hold anything back now. More and more cum just kept coming out of him as if he were a factory of cum.
“AAAAAAAHHHHHH! MORE! DON’T STOP!” He screamed.
Dew suddenly stopped and stood in front of him. She rubbed her body against his naked and sweaty body. Then she lied down on her back on the bed and opened her legs as wide as she could. “Your turn Master. Delight me! Devour my wet pussy! I won’t disappoint you!” she said seductively.
Draco hurried and put his tongue in her pussy. His tongue moved and wriggled in every part it could reach. He kissed and then continued to devour her pussy as she asked him to. It tasted so damn good. Her juices flowed and he drank them all, down to the last drop. After she had cummed several times, he took his head out and looked at Dew.

“Well, my sexy and tasty Master. Did you enjoy me?” she teased.
“Oh yes! Yes I loved you my Mistress. You taste so good.” He answered, and bent over for few more licks. Then, he moved over her breasts and licked her nipples, while his finger played in her pussy.
“Fuck me baby one more time!” she sang and ordered.
So, Draco thrust his dick into her wet pussy and jumped up and down on her, making her breasts move. He sucked on her nipples again, then their tongues met.

Finally, Draco took his manhood out, his tongue stopped loving hers and they both got up. Their bodies were full of sweat.
“I enjoyed, every bit of you, Dew. Guess, your Master was a failure.”
“Not quite, the spanking and the teasing were very good. And when you took your boxers off, I wanted to bite your penis off. Guess I wasn’t the submissive slave. But I enjoyed this A LOT!”
“Me too baby, me too.” Draco said and kissed her lips.
“Will you give me a quick shower and tuck me in?” Dew said.
“With pleasure.” And he spanked her ass all the way to the shower. There, he opened the warm water and let it pour over their hot and sweating bodies. They played together, rubbing their bodies against each other. Nipples to nipples, ass to ass, pussy to a very hard manhood. They dirty danced under the warm water.

When they came out, Draco dried his girl, then put her to bed. He slipped in under the covers next to her and put an arm around her. With no notice, she jumped over him, riding his manhood. As she rocked, her breasts danced. She bent over him and whispered in his ears; “My pussy is in love with your cock, and I am in love with you and your cock too!”
“Glad it’s mutual.” He said and kissed her.
She got up and slept in his arms, exhausted. He kissed lips one last time and fell asleep with a hand on her ass and the other on her back.

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  • Prinzessin Lilliana
    April 11, 2008
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    Veryy Hott!

    That's incredibly hot
    U do know how to excite imaginationa and desirein ur readers


  • Prinzessin Lilliana
    April 11, 2008

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    Veryy Hott!

    That's incredibly hot
    U do know how to excite imaginationa and desirein ur readers


  • penman gold member
    March 30, 2007

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    Whew!

    What an incredible tale. My goodness you sure know how to get the juices going. Very skillfully done.

  • Fossil
    February 1, 2007

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    been away for a while but thanks for ur invitation...what a hot stuff u arranged for us...it was really quite an experience reading...truely hot!


  • Veronica Leigh
    January 30, 2007
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    jeez! That was def. erotic! good job with this Nooni! I liked it a lot! Can't wait for part 4!!!


    • NooNiThEWitcH
      January 30, 2007
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      If I managed to take over the computer tonight, I'l write it Thank you for the comment and the applauds.


  • FisherCat
    January 26, 2007

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    WOW!!! WOW!!! WOW!!!

    *Wipes fog from computer screen* Let me find a frozen lake to cool off, then I will be back with my comment.


    Now that I am froze, I am gonna have to reread this Hot number to warm up once again. You have done a remarkable job on these!!! You really heat up your readers with these. My wife may not be safe tonight, hehehe Thanks for sharing such a delightful read. Keep your pen flowing.


    • NooNiThEWitcH
      January 26, 2007
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      Thank you so so much FisherCat! I am really glad you enjoyed reading *grins with joy* Thank you for the wonderful comment and the applaud. If you are free check out the first two parts, I'll be posting part 4 shortly, my parents and lil sis have to be sleeping though
      Nooni


  • No deliverance
    January 23, 2007

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    oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh *blushes*
    this is just wow!!
    pretty steamy girl good to see that you still got it!!!
    Cant wait for the 4th!
    All my love to the erotica queen!!!


    ~Hana~


    • NooNiThEWitcH
      January 24, 2007
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      I'm speechless Hana! Glad you enjoyed it I knew you would hahaha thank you for the applauds


  • paullallady silver member
    January 22, 2007

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    WHEWWWWWW!!!! WOW. You definately should be in contact with a publisher. This is over the top good!!!


  • TWiSTEDxCUPCAKE
    January 22, 2007

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    WOW!!!!!!!!!! That was amazingly hot. This is great, Nooni. You have a talent for erotica writing, I mean you are a great writer in every catagory, but this is just mind blowing.
    Keep Writing
    ~~Meri~~


    • NooNiThEWitcH
      January 22, 2007
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      Naughty Meri! My sis, you should not have read this!
      (ur profile says u're 140 yrs hehe) but this is 4 grown ups but I always welcome a good comment and applauds hehe!


  • isisspirit
    January 22, 2007

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    I like I like I like. This is cool, the power play is really effective. The only thing i cud possibly pick on is some of your tenses are off. just little things, like you wrote "She lied down on her back" instead of "She LAY..." and cummed instead of came, but other than that I can find no faults, this was very sexy and real, great character development, two thumbs up


    • NooNiThEWitcH
      January 22, 2007
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      thank you for reading, commenting and applauding. Glad you enjoyed it
      (as for the lied/lay down part.. I have 2 sentences to solve the confuse, you lay down a table, but you lie down )


  • Master Warious
    January 21, 2007

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    well done

    Sorry I haven't been on recently.

    Excellent job on this chapter. Some of your prose need polishing in some places but when you get going on a story like this its hard to pick some things up at times.

    You're getting quite popular with this seiries Nooni ^_^
    That is wonderful.

    Have fun with your next chapter.

    ~ Warious


    • NooNiThEWitcH
      January 21, 2007
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      Thank you so much Warious, glad to see you too
      And I'm glad you enjoyed reading this, thank you for the applauds. I'll try writing part 4 in the next couple of days, just have to get the family out of the way


  • Ktulu Blackwolfe silver member
    January 21, 2007

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    This is a very hot read. I am glad that you invited me to read this story. I think you did a very good job, it was easy to follow and very enjoyable. Keep it up.

    **Ktulu Blackwolfe**


    • NooNiThEWitcH
      January 21, 2007
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      Thank you soo much Ktulu, glad you enjoyed reading it. And thank you for the applaud


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    January 20, 2007

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    she jumped over him, riding his manhood. As she rocked, her breasts danced. She bent over him and whispered in his ears; “My pussy is in love with your cock, and I am in love with you and your cock too!”
    “Glad it’s mutual.” He said and kissed her.
    She got up and slept in his arms, exhausted. He kissed lips one last time and fell asleep with a hand on her ass and the other on her back.

    I am speechless...


  • Vernal Bloom
    January 20, 2007

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    I agree with Raneem. What a girl is this Dew! UGH!! I have no idea how this cruise will finish, Nooni, but I guess Draco will leave Dew since he uses her enough
    Let’s see and ah you were so master in creating erotic scenes.
    Good luck in your next part but hey, don’t make it all like your previous ones. I want Dew’s tears at the end of this story. Hehe I know I’m naughty

    ~Massy~


    • NooNiThEWitcH
      January 20, 2007
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      No Massy, you're not naughty, you're EVIL! Dew and Draco will be together FOREVER! HAHAHA! (I mean that)
      Thankx for the applauds though!


  • StarEyes
    January 19, 2007

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    HOPE YOU HAND OUT ICE WITH THIS ONE!!!

    DAMN Girl, this is becoming more and more enjoyable with each part!!!!! And hey thanks for steaming up my screen, now it is clean once again!!!!!!! What a great read this is!!!!!!! Keep that pen flowing!!! I'm gonna keep reading this one!!!!!!! What a great read! to say the least! I love it!!!


    • NooNiThEWitcH
      January 19, 2007
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      Thank you sunshine glad you enjoyed reading this. I'll be sure to IM when i post part 4, I won't be too long


  • zilbermann silver member
    January 19, 2007

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    Very hot! Magic sex is much better than muggle sex; Draco just keeps going and going like the bunny in those ads.

    OK, you may welcome my proofreading talents, so:

    Line 20, first sentence -- word "how" omitted.

    Line 31 -- should "he" be "she" at the end?

    Line 47 -- "arm water"

    Perhaps I could find more mistakes if I tried to study this more carefully, but I'm tired so I will leave it at that.

    I always thought "cum" meant semen; you are using it as a synonym for "come". I guess you can if you want to, though I have not seen the word used that way before.

    I am looking forward to the next part.


    • NooNiThEWitcH
      January 19, 2007
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      Thank you for your comment and your corrections. Can't find those even if i read my piece over again, and unlike poetry I can't read this out loud
      Weird, you've not seen 'cum' in that sense.. that's how i've seen it on AP.. (where I get my knowledge hehe)
      Thank you for the applaud, glad you enjoyed my work. I'll IM when I post part 4

      Nooni


  • Patience15
    January 19, 2007

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    This was absolutely amazing. It actually made me want to be Dew. Jajaja. This was excellent i look forward to reading more of your work. Emily


    • NooNiThEWitcH
      January 19, 2007
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      Thank you so so much Emily, give me a week and I'll post part 4, and I'll be sure to IM YOU. Glad you enjoyed reading this, thankx for the applaud


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    January 18, 2007
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    Whew that was hot!! You really know how to stimulate your audience!!! Well done.

    Jeannie


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    January 18, 2007

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    Mmmmmmmmmmm good! Sexy and hot! Dang, but this was erotic and makes me wish for my man
    Very well done!


  • less than a poet
    January 18, 2007

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    *ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh*

    oh man u should hand ur scripts to a porn company lol what d hell is this girl oh man ur like well ur a master hehe but still enjoyed the library one more it was more sensual ur amaziiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiing

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