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Lady Siren

Notes of passion and tones of lust
Hear her song and fall in love
Follow her voice until the end of sorrow
Never return to see tomorrow.

Flying high in soprano skies
Waves that peak in the baritone seas
The soft ocean breeze hide the pleas
Of the ones that succumb to her song.

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For Lady Stone who has the most beautiful voice on AP.

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  • Swan song gold member
    May 30, 2007
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    Very nice. A good flow and a sensual seductive little peace of work here. I liked hti svery much.


  • xoxhanniexox
    February 20, 2007
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    A beautiful poem.. I also like that it was actually written for someone.. good job!

  • Welcome-To-Hell
    February 20, 2007

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    This is beautiful to fall in love with a sirens song is both a wonderful idea and possible dreary wonderfully penned


  • April Renee
    February 3, 2007
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    very nice. good job with writing this. enjoyed the read.

    blu

  • greyhaime silver member
    January 22, 2007

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    I LOVE IT!!!!!!

    awweeee,,,
    I loved this thank you so much for doing this for me.... I don't think I have had anyone write for my voice before..
    you do me much honor...

    thank you my sweet apples..


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    January 19, 2007

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    this is amazing, she has more then a beautiful vocie it is divine, this is something great babe, and i know she will love you, you are a wonderful woman keep it flowing

  • Emerald Dreams
    January 18, 2007
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    Awesome poem for a woman with a truely awesome voice.

    Karla

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