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Hopeful Despair

In an opaque room
A voice crying
Dripping with
Despair

Loneliness overcomes
Sadness turns to hope
The knife holds life
Frantic hands
Bring life

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Written June 4th, 2003

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  • JordanRene
    September 14, 2003
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    What a wonderfull poem! It truly expressed many emotions! Must have had a muse around you while writting this!
    ~~~Jordan~~~

  • accordingtome
    June 5, 2003
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    wow