Never will I forget~
Forever I will remember.
Never will I stop loving you~
Forever I will love you.
Never will I let our love die~
Forever it will stay alive inside of me.
Never will I truly be alone~
Forever, I will carry our few moments with me.
Never is a promise you made me~
Forever I will cherish that promise made.
Forever as I walk through life~
Never do I have to fear.
Forever now, when life seems too hard, I know that
Never will I be alone.
Never is a promise you made me and
Forever I will carry it with me.
Author notes
This was inspired by a conversation I had once with our beloved lion.
Rules
A contest entry
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800 points, ended June 26, 2007, 138 entries
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never-forever i see. a rich reservoir of place and hope and belonging and love and belief in always and another. thanks so much for sharing.
just beautiful.
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you are a lady of your promise and that my dear is a rare and beutiful quality in any soul. beautiful pen.
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This has already won several trophys, so I shall remove it from my contest.
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thank you so much for sharing this heartfelt tribute poem with us on the occasion of my contest "the key to enlightenment : love ? wisdom ? both ?"
your words are simple and sincere and very touching ... may love always guide your path ...
much love,
maa
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This is a really great poem.
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wow...absolutely amazing!
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Wonderful
Sweetheart this is heartfelt emotions you've crafted so beautifully... the vows of a wedding ... with such love and dedication, you are already a winner... few spoken words but has depths of deepest ocean in which you would dive & swim through but not alone ever... promises are made to be kept not broken, you're poem says that beautifully... very well written... thanks for letting us know what really I Do should mean... take care Minoo
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Thanks hon, for a wonderful comment...But this came from a conversation that I had with someone else. My husband has no kind of sentiment in his body, never mind his little finger
but I love him....
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never have i read such a cute poem like this
forever will i remember it.
wonderful is all that i can say..
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never and forever, quite a concept...I think you have done well here the only thing that I think, perhaps, should be changed...is this line "Never I will be alone"= Never will I be alone"..that just works better for me.
best of luck Freda
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What a very lovely little poem. Thanks for sharing this... i really enjoyed reading it.
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wow...what a happy sounding poem until you reach the last 2 lines:
"Never is a promise you made me and
Forever I will carry it with me."
what a brooding and horrifying piece. all i can really say is wow...not that i didn't like it. in fact the other way around-i loved it.
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Very nicely done
A heartfelt piece you have here .
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just rereading...beautiful and loyal, like you
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Never is a promise you made me~
Forever I will cherish that promise made.
I love these lines this write is enduring to my heart. I love the romantic feel to it. I hope your love endures this long. Thanks for the thoughtful comment on my write. I was trying a different style of writing.Thank you for the lovely comments. Great work sis
love brenda
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This just amazing! I love the way this is written. A promise made from earth and the heavens, for eternity. Just lovely!
much love,
Michelle
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Very good
This is a very nice written piece I liked the way you used and repeated the words FOREVER and NEVER.
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This is so romantic. I enjoyed reading it very much. Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest.
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This is a beautiful and romantic poem. I can tell it was written with love. It also brought a smile to my face. Enjoyed the read!!! Thank you for entering my contest.
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nice
am moved by the forever that is in this work all the words let the promise of love stand till past the end of time.
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I'm sorry, it's just not what I'm looking for.
thanks
whisper
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Beautiful!
A promise is a Powerful connection and I imagine this carrying over to the other side as well!
Thank You for sharing this memory
YES- I REMEMBER
Many blessings to You!
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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3 claps...9pts
Reward from the Lionsloves Lair reading list
~Lilac~
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Nice memories to have, he was so loving and you have captured him perfectly in this poem...
He has left such an emptiness, I guess poems will be written for him for a long time yet
Love and smiles
~Lilac
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Such a touching heartfelt write. Very smooth read. Such a dedication to make a promise like that. A lovely conversation and a beautiful tribute to Tim. You have such a way with words.
Snappy
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I love how this shows the dichotomy of life and how both sides can mean the same beautiful message, there is no negative to fear in words of love. Well done.
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well i thought this was to your husband til i read your authors notes. the rhythm is good. i like the way the beginning of the line is repeated reversed in the second part. excellent write. keep on writing. you are talented. God bless you
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A beautiful, beautiful sharing in tribute to Tim; I know he would love it! Awesomely written, sweetie!
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A beauitful tribute
A beauitful poem
I loved it
I felt your love and compassion
I could relate. Sometimes I miss him more than anything
Thank you for sharing this beauitful piece
Well done
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A beautiful write and tribute to Tim. Deep expression of emotion. Lovely flow and tone. He meant so much to all of us. Your lovely words touch my heart. Thanks so much for sharing this with us. Shelley
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ANOTHER FINE TRIBUTE TO LIONHEART - A TRUE KING OF HEARTS.
Forever now, when life seems to hard, I know that
Never I will be alone.
I think to in the first verse should be spelled too with 2 oo's. Otherwise and despite of that pesky little typo as I often make - this is another fine tribute and shining example of your love for Lionsheart who everyone who knows you on or reads this on AP can plainly see will live in you forever - on earth and in heaven, too - when that day arrives. Lionheart will be alive in you and in the hearts and souls of all those that he touched with his words and deedsbeyond the end of time.
Peace & Love!
Earl.
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I just got a chill down my spine... This was filled with emotion and the message carried across, crystal clear... This was just... WOW (I still can't find a word)...
Keep that pen of yours flowing sis...
With ink that never fade...
Love you always...
Elmarie
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Meraviglioso!
I am not that into "love poetry", mainly because its really hard for me to write it. I envy those that can write good love literature! But I must say this was very elegantly written. The mix of positive and negative was simply amazing. Keep up the great work. Your lines "Forever now, when life seems to hard, I know that Never I will be alone" is such a great line. Even though there is much confusion in whatever you would call my relationship... I really love this and its kind of how I feel. Wonderfully written and... Simply I am at a loss for words. Sounds like wedding vows or loves last words. This is just great!! I would love to share this with everyone. If you wouldn't mind, could I send the link to this poem to a couple friends?
Amo questo poem. Continuare il buon lavoro.
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this is really sweet. i like your never/forever perspective that brings both words into positive meaning. although i don't quite understand why you cherish the promise of never, i think this is very quaint and pretty.
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VERY ROMANTIC
EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS POETIC PIECE IS DARLING. AND I LOVE YOUR AUTHOR'S COMMENT!
KEEP ON PENNING
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This is a very sweet poem. I love the shortness of the stanza's and how they still remain sweet.
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Interesting usage of negative and positive influences. Though I'm not much a love poetry fan (ok, I'm not a fan at all) yours seems decent. It would suffice brilliantly for wedding vows, methinks.
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Never and forever as powerful words. If you can keep such promises you are noble and strong. We think of the ones that have passed on more and more.
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I love the way you used never and forever. A piece so full of emotion, beautiful.
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I love you
I know you won't break these promises, mom. Tim believes in you, as i do. never stop writing and never stop being our angel
Love, Little One
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so beautiful
oh sunshine what a beautiful tribute to your friend. I know he will love this and id smiling now at it. I did not know him personally but this poem is so touching. I really like the way you used the repeat phrases in it, added a certain touch to it. Bravo to you...
Becky
Psssst...you left the "e" off of life, but I won't tell
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Lionslove is smiling down on you!
This is so beautful!
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TOTALLY AMAZING
THIS IS AN AMAZING POEM!!! OMGOSH!!!
I love it, I love it, I love it....
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well I must say after just reading your husbands newest post, then coming directly to here I had tears in my eyes by the time I got to your authors notes... the two of you are gonna give me heart failure, was sure they were coinciding with one another. Now having regained my senses... this is an extra special write as it was inspired by a true gentle heart. Lion will live on forever through many of our writes, he taught so many of us so many things. Very nice write dear.
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Fantastic!!!!!!!
This was beautifully done! I will say this to you, there will never be anyone else for you are the only one. Please don't ever think that you must walk alone. You have done a remarkable job on this piece. Keep your beautiful pen flowing.
Love ya
Jim
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Perfect poem! I LOVE the way you say "forever" and then "never".
The title almost seemed contradictory until I read it, then the whole beautiful poem came and I saw it all! I love it!
ek is lief vir jou altyd
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