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Mr. Sandman

Mr. Sandman
bring me a dream.
Make it one
with you and me.

Make it romantic
So I never wake up
Make love to me
like I can't get enough
I'll make you a clover
to give you good luck
Like a virgin, on you, I'm stuck.

Ice cream and daisys
put a smile on my face
I'm your queen at your feet
your love not to be replaced
Tell me I'm beautiful
like the stars in space

Love me tender, love me sweet,
hold my hand, walk me down a beach
golden sunsets, and watery mists,
make it a dream I could never forget.

Make it warm
like a summer night
Make a fire
with just enough light
Wrapped in a blanket
all snuggled and tight
Give me wings and let me take flight
Make it a wonderful
endless sight.

Mr. Sandman
bring me a dream
Make it one
with you and me

Mr. Sandman
bring me a dream
Where I'm in your arms
for enternity

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  • I will stand by you
    January 19, 2007
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    wow

    mr.sandman is great


  • Mori-lux
    January 19, 2007
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    its adorible!

    the tidle caught my eye so i had come see what it was all about. bravo! =)


  • blackwizard1988
    January 19, 2007

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    an unusal write to say the least. You dont get many like this. Natural flow brings it to life. gwd write, thanks for sharing


  • Poetdontknowit
    January 19, 2007

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    NICE JOB

    I T-TOTALLY ENJOYED THIS SWEET LITTLE WRITE. IT IS JUST ADORABLE!
    KEEP ON PENNING!
    POETDONTKNOWIT