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It wasn't easy to be in Love, Honey.


When I have to say 'Good Bye', I do it.

No matter how many times it will take

to make me realized...

" Things will be go on in it's own way."



When I have to say 'Take Care,' I can do it.

No matters how many times it will take

to make me smarter to get the thing.

"I have to calm down when you are going far from me."

I have to take thigs easily.

I send you my best smile sealed with a little kiss,

To say I miss you this year so much in this special day.

Honey, you and your memories are safe in my heart always.

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  • Romily
    April 27, 2007
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    thank you so much.


  • Dusty
    April 26, 2007

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    This is a wonderful poem it really shows how when your in love sometimes you care more for how that person feels then yourself. It also reminds me of when I tried to move away fromthe man i love.
    El
    xx xx xx


  • Romily
    April 17, 2007
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    thank you.


  • Shapla
    January 24, 2007

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    nice,mervellous, beautiful.....what else can be said about this. it was really outstanding. keep up writing, sweety.


  • Sweetangelgrace
    January 23, 2007

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    This is beautifully written!!!

    This is a beautiful expression of real and beautiful love. I know, it is hard if our love one is far away. We just send our best smile sealed with a kiss across the miles for Valentines day but just believe in your heart that Love always find a way...The miles cannot separate our hearts,so far and yet so near us, know that someone far away thinking of us too...

    Thanks for entering my contest!

    ~~GRACE~~


  • I am a Mindfreak
    January 19, 2007

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    First Impression: This definitely fits what the title of the poem says. You show that love may not be easy...but yet no matter what happens, even through heartache, a person can movie on.
    Favorite lines:
    6-8: Shows that you can honestly make it on your own no matter what may come your way.
    13: It was a great line to sum up the entire poem
    Great job and keep up the great work. Thanks for commenting on my poem as well.

  • Leaving Today
    January 18, 2007

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    "To say I miss you this year so much in this special day." should be "
    To say I miss you this year so much on this special day."

    liked your poem, good work.


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