Your eyes suiduce me,
your kisses convey,
I found a sweet love in the drive thru lane.
You gazed upon me,
with blue eyes,
you came over to see me,
caught me by surprise.
You showed me caring,
told me to "take it slow",
if it's ment to be it'll be.
Oh how I pray that we have a love that will grow,
a best friend,
that's what you are for now,
God give us the strength and the will to make this love blossom.
So in the end will it pay off?
Author notes
this is for all the girls who've found love in REALLY unexpected places....like a drive thru!!!HEHE
Talk to me people.....please?!
Comments
-
beautiful
sis, this is the most amazing piece that i have ever read!! and I'm a collaborator!! it is beautiful! keep this up and you'll be famous in NO time!! love yous!!
-
Enticing!
This is very good and shows grow of your writing. It builds up nice and allows the reader to experience this passion in bloom!
I love the following part:
"Your eyes suiduce me,
your kisses convey,
I found a sweet love in the drive thru lane."
It flows off the tonuge.
"You showed me caring,
told me to "take it slow",
if it's ment to be it'll be."
My Dear friend - Bravo! You make me grow!
Adding your comment:
