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~* Violated *~

 



Serpentine tongue

hisses and spits

twisted truths

in fire's pit.

 

In darkened solitude

a whispered chant

thins threads

of attachment.

 

Lucidness obscured

by obsidian haze;

psychological thought

rerouted

               &

                 tainted.

 

Thieving digits filch

strands of mane

unaware;

purest essence

tossed

in cauldron's boil.

 

Equal parts

of seven sins

mixed

&

stirred,

heated to perfection

a dangerous combination.


Sickest greed

of darkness

hides;

masked behind

innocence

                  &

                      light.


 

No trespassing sign

                           - ignored -

sanctuary of self

                         -violated-

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • DarkChildsKiss silver member
    February 19, 2007

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    Thanks for entering!

    Now I am going to just be honest with you, I really like this poem. It makes me realize why I love dark poetry so much. It is very good. I enjoyed it! Thanks for entering! I appreciate your entry!


  • Frogzter gold member
    January 23, 2007

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    I found this to be a most interesting piece and loved the form! I love the choice of words as well! Best wishes in the contest!
    Frogz~


  • DarkChildsKiss silver member
    January 18, 2007
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    Thank you for entering my contest. I'll give my true comment to this poem later.


  • January 18, 2007

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    Lucidness obscured

    by obsidian haze;

    psychological thought

    rerouted

    &

    tainted.








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