From the uncertain fringes of twilight,
As hues of every colour show through
To reflect the heart's emotions
Shining bright and true.
The soft pink of happiness and love,
With the blazing crimson of anger,
And the harmonic shades of purple,
Orange's vital energy,
The garish yellow of fear,
Against the envious emerald green,
The greyness of misery with
White's sweet innocence and purity,
The blue of the day - sad to fade away,
Into the blackness of midnight's dark secrets
Where feelings are hidden away
Stored until tommorow to be reborn anew
With the brand new day..
See what you wish to see
Choose the meanings yourself
But you can't deny that
Every facet of imagination is
Reflected in the shades of night.
Author notes
heh - this is quite strange - I might edit it after some people tell me what they think.
A contest entry
- Shades of Night (CONTEST) by Touchof1der.
600 points, ended February 5, 2007, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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It was very interesting to e the way you incorparted so many of the nighttime hues. You have create a most unique ambience, making this a joy to read. I appreciate you taking the time and making the effort to enter my contest. Thank you and good luck!
♥ Touchof1der -
AWESOME!
Nota bene. Very good. Me like-y. lol. Excellent form and imagery.
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This is brilliant, a very vibrant poem, good flow and excellent imagery, well done.
~Katie~
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