From the darkness comes a light
Fire and embers burning bright
Before your last hope was frayed
a light in the darkness you are saved
Dressed in black , people of the night
Sometimes others stare at us in fright
Even though our dark cloths don't show our light
We are the kind ones of the night
From our darkness comes a light
Fire and embers burning bright
Burn all the hatred burn the fright
Ashes ashes bury these shadows of the night
Evil and good can exist night and day
Sometimes evil wears white , but in black we play
Goodness hiding in the darkened time of night
Bringing those evil ones such terror and fright
From my darkness comes a light
Fire and embers burning bright
Burn all the hatred burn all the fright
Burn all the fears in my cover of night
A contest entry
- Shades of Night (CONTEST) by Touchof1der.
600 points, ended February 5, 2007, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Evil and good can exist night and day
Sometimes evil wears white , but in black we play
Goodness hiding in the darkened time of night
Bringing those evil ones such terror and fright
i luvd those lines. the whole poem is so beautiful. nice ... no ... great job!!!!
madhu.
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a very good poem I really enjoyed it...
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good
I like this. It sort reminds me of babbling, but I can see a pattern and I can picture, sort of, what the verses draw on. -
This held a certain eeriness to it for me. I felt touches of suspense that ever so subtly pull the reader in. I appreciate you taking the time and making the effort to enter my contest. Thank you and good luck!
♥ Touchof1der -
GreatgreatgreatgreatgreatgreatGREAT!!! As usual...
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Great write....shows a total different side to the darkeness...definitly something that u would write...a lot about ur personality pops out in this! Great write!
MINDIE
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Gothical Write, LMAO!
Hi, it's me again, lol.
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"Dressed in black , people of the night
Sometimes others stare at us in fright
Even hough our dark cloths don't show our light
We are the kind ones of the night"
------This stanza reminds me of Goths...lol.
"Evil and good can exist night and day
Sometimes evil wears white , but in black we play"
------This reminds me of you
"From my darkness comes a light
Fire and embers burning bright
Burn all the hatred burn all the fright
Burn all the fears in my cover of night"
----- I like this part of the stanza.
Good luck in the contest!
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