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Give you my heart (before it's too late)

I dreamt of you again last night
Waking up alone was such a fright
But you can come and stop my pain
Take me into your arms once again

Is there something i should know
My love will always for you grow
No matter what i will feel strong
For to me you can do no wrong

I don't want to wait
I want to give you my heart
Before it is too late
I have chosen my fate
I want to give you my heart
Before it is too late

I will do anything for you
If you promise that this is true
I'm just begging for a change
Beacuse your lack of love is drving me insane

I want to feel this before it dies
We haven't given it enough tries
I haven't felt anything like this before
So from you i need so much more

I don't want to wait
I want to give you my heart
Before it is too late
I have chosen my fate
I want to give you my heart
Before it is too late

It cannot be too late
This is not the closng date
I'm feeling so alone
I can't bear to see you go

I don't want to wait
I want to give you my heart
Before it is too late
I have chosen my fate
I want to give you my heart
Before it is too late

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  • zhaniswolf
    July 3, 2007

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    i actually kinda like the lyrics. put some music to it, and i can see it as a soft rock or even hard rock song. give it some guitar solos... sorry the singer in me took over a second. the chorus is a little ... redundant, but still good. with the proper music and singer, this wouldn't be too bad.