Special Someone

I am sick of all the lies you told me
Never telling me the truth
Doing things behind my back
Talking all that shit
Spearding all those rumors

You make me sick
Everytime I think about you
It makes me want to vomit
You suck
And yes..you know it

I hate you
I hate you with a passion
You are the worest thing to ever come in my life
I wish you would dissappear
Go away and never come back

Fuck you
Fuck you, you dirty asshole
I hope you die
A long and painful death

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Opition #1

A contest entry

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Razor-Blade Romance
June 1, 2007
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Very nice !!! Well done !!!
RyanNevermore
April 27, 2007
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You must have really been hurting and pissed when you wrote this.
x-Black-Butterfly-x
April 26, 2007
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intense
and full of emotions
well done
XHollowXEyesX
April 25, 2007

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hmm a very intense write. full of such raw and strong emotion. I love the upbeat flow the whole thing,it really adds to the essence of it all.
thanks for entering anf goodlcuk
Trixie08
March 26, 2007

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WOW!
This is how I feel everyday of my life. I'm glad someone feels the same way. This is a great rant piece and it's just so fast paced and just takes you on a ride. It starts out saying what you've done to me and ends with yeah fuck you asshole. I loved that; great flow and fun to read. Great Write! and Best of luck in the contest.