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Wish for me

Crossing paths with a angel
Just noticing it's a archangel
Leaving behind my love for him
Leaving behind my heart for him.

Can you cry? To me tonight?
Can you fly? For me tonight?
Will you be by my side, through the night?
Will you be mine?


Holding you close
Under the pressure.
Muffled screams
And scared dreams
Loud yelling
And strong poundings
All coming from that angel down the hall.
Driving people insane with their horrible pain.
Cross your heart
And swear to die.



Can you cry? To me tonight?
Can you fly? For me tonight?
Will you be by my side, through the night?
Will you be mine?




I walk along the railroad path
Just to find, what was left
I need to be, the one who cries
I need to be, the one who always dies in the end.
It's like a movie
Set on fast forward
Except for me it's set to overdrive
I need to be, the only one who can see me.
I need to be, the only one who can see him.
I hope and pray
On the smallist star
To make my wish come true
It's not a big one
It's not a small one
I wish to be dead now
I have just now noticed that I was that angel
I have noticed, that I was the one who was confused
I have noticed, the frown upon my face
So  please, set me free!


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  • calambres91
    February 18, 2007
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    the ending is weird but i liked it


  • catz Moderators member
    February 1, 2007
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    This is such a thoughtful write. You've brought your feelings to life within it's lines. And you've expressed things which many of us feel from time to time.

    Good job ... and thank you for the wonderful hugs and flowers you left on my guestbook

    Dee


  • CrimsonRain1313
    January 22, 2007
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    beautiful poem with an intriguing little story of tragedy. nice. one question. is this a song? i dont kno why but i just got that songy sort of feeling as i was reading it. lol. anyways, if not, u could probably easily make it in2 one. anywho, nice work.
    Peace && Blesses
    ~Rain

  • JupiterLove
    January 18, 2007
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    I like the way it is done...Unique


  • January 18, 2007
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    Very beautiful! You always write such art


  • Following Nothing
    January 18, 2007
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    Beautiful and inspiring. You did a fantastic job!

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