Chocolat:
au lait, dark or hazelnut
The Queen of absolute sweetness,
or femme fatale of erotic deliciousness.
Her milky scent -
diffusing with auras of euphoria
She is the Goddess of Crave
a crunch:
showers of divine goodness
unlocking bottles of feverish ecstasy:
a pint of loveliness, a spoon of love;
a cup of cuteness, and
gallons of addictive au lait chocolat
Or a darker aroma, just like Cora:
bite me, kiss me, take me
her bittersweet essences,
my continued hearthrobs!
Her seducious smells, slowly luring..
slowly tearing, slowly ..
I am entrapped in her heightened erections
The lady Dark Chocolate:
her body so tasty, yet her scents so bitter
my daring Aphrodite!
Chocolat, and her hazelnut bodkin,
the elegant courtesan of charm:
meticulously decorated,
saliciously enchanting
me
'Bite me, bite me'
this was her invitation
A chew:
the mixture of nutty exotica, and smooth beauty
A paradise of joy
Chocolat,
au lait, dark or hazelnut
gashed with heavenly sweetness;
added with the devil's temptations;
mixed with foreign beauty
My love, my friend, my sins
Chocolat
Author notes
option 5: contest namesake & in some ways option 3
I hope I get this one right, was combining milk (au lait), dark and hazelnut chocolates together. Chocolat is french for chocolate.
*Cora - Cora from Postman Always Rings Twice by J.M.Cain
Dedicated to slavetothemusic, thepyromaniac and Ikorus, or my favourite chocoholics.
I need a better title. Bernini's Ecstasy of ___ just won't do the job.
A contest entry
- chocolate, chocOLATE, and even more CHOCOLATE! by StephLippitt.
600 points, ended February 4, 2007, 16 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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me
'Bite me, bite me'
this was her invitation
after this read i will be biting lots of it... my fav is old jamaican....mmmmm congrats on your gold
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Congratulations on gold - you have summed it all up in this great poem!
Ann
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this is just breathtaking...i love the way you describe things...the way you can grasp the essence of whatever you talk about...u see i'm not a chocoholic but i do live the euphoria it brings sometimes...and this is just beautiful...
best of luck for the contest !
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Yes, you definetly did this right! I absolutly love this. It matches both options perfectly, the chocolate being the one the narrating voice is erotic with! An amazing job!
Good luck in the contest!
hugs,
Steph -
Absolutely beautiful, you capture many levels of passion, temptation and pleasure. I thought of chocolate not only as an aphrodisiac, but a cure and a poison. And I liked the repetition of "bite me", I thought of chocolate personified as a dangerous woman, almost a whore but one who dominates. Excellent--good luck with the competition!
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