An angel on earth
Right there, in front my very own eyes
His golden, rich hair smoothly flowing in the breeze
His eyes shiny as diamonds
Astute, calm face
Silent
Just there within reach
Time stops
Only heart beats...quietly in the background
With each breath I fear it will end
In slow motion, step after step...
His touch, a bliss
Like thunder spreads through every
Inch of my body
His kiss, my desire, my wish
Like honey so sweet and rich
I tremble with each
In his arms,
A shiver up my spine,
I fly to heaven
But why?
If on earth is my Garden of Eden
Our souls join together
In great harmony
Rhythm
Like a violin and cello forming
Music notes together
He is my
lust, wish, love, desire, dream
want, need, hope
...a treasure
Candle lit
In darkness
Warmth
Scent of roses
Sweet taste of honey
Soft yet strong making
Every sense in my body
Awake.
With a last kiss
Good night
My angel, my savior, my love
My Garden of Eden
on
Earth.
A contest entry
- Pre-Write Challenge by Nicolette Everett.
450 points, ended November 25, 2007, 71 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 25 and under by silverscent.
460 points, ended February 12, 2008, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Any topic, Pre written or New, I don't mind by lexy23.
550 points, ended February 13, 2008, 57 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
Comments
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beautiful I love this it brings out desire and bliss
and longing of the one you love that is placed in your life -
This is a very lovely poem. The eternal blissful love that you express is completely there. Theres a sensation in your poem too that you express nicely. Comparing music to love was a very nice touch.
Great job!
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Ooh a very sensual and sweet poem. Absolutely adorable. Thank you for entering!
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lovely!
What a beautiful poem of love to your Earth Angel..So very lovely!
These lines, I adore:
"Our souls join together
In great harmony
Rhythm
Like a violin and cello forming
Music notes together"
Sweet...
Lynda
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