Valentine who's blood is electricity
roams through the air, who's emotion
i so deeply care
You are the blood that runs through
my veins, for ever word you speak gets
me insane
When you sit in silence and do not speak
it creates many emotions that makes my un
seen heart rumble and and kinda freak
For you are my heart and together i am your
soul, is that not the reason for such a
untouchable and unseen goal
My heart bleeds for your spiritual glow at the
time of my conception, who would have known
to meet you could put me in such an breakable
heart felt love zone
A contest entry
- My Bloody Valentine (CONTEST) by Touchof1der.
900 points, ended February 2, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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WoW! This was an unexpected treat to read. I do agree with the previous commenter in regards to what areas could use a little "tweaking" here and there. You have a thoughtful poem here, I woud spruce it up a little.; I appreciate the time and effort you took to enter my contest. Thank you and good luck!
♥ Touchof1der
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