You've made your hell
And now you have to live in it.
You've made your hell-
All by yourself
Stole all the glory
From the thunder-
Thought, you'd get away with it
You stole the glory, for yourself
I'd kill for you, and no one else
Until you place me back upon my shelf
I will be your manakin to manipulate
If you think you can change our fate!
The world is yours,
If only I could I'd offer it-
Served on a tray of gold inlay.
Offer you the world, if I may...
Maybe I will, someday
Just wait here for a rainy day
But-
You've made your hell,
And now you have to live in it!
You've made your hell-
All by yourself!
You suck the life, right off my bones
And they're so succulent,
-To your sick tastes, what a waste.
I make a mountain out of moles,
Offer you, my soul, black as coal
And you always, swallow it whole.
My flesh is a disaster, but a feast for you
I am no fool, I sacrifice myself, a tool
For you alone, I give up any wealth,
For you alone, will be my health
And Yet-
You've made your hell,
And now you have to live in it!
You've made your hell-
All by yourself!
You've made your hell-
All by yourself...
You made your hell-
And no one else...
They were just the Avatar-
Of your crooked self.
Punishment for all your sins,
Now you're burning in hell-
On earth-
And what all was it worth,
Just, to escape-
Reality, by using needles...
One cold prick, and you were flying!
But when all is said and done-
You're just dying-
To get to hell- skip the handbasket!
You can ride with me...
Let's roast in Hell...?
A contest entry
- Song/Lyric Writer's Contest by Acronym.
850 points, ended March 9, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I like the idea of this and even the title. But alot of it seems a little forced and its almost if you rhmyed only at your own convenience. And that kind well....annoyed me a bit.
But its not all bad, it has a lot of meaning to it and also a definite emotion for it. So I appluad you on that and I tell you now that lyrics (to me) arent the easiest thing in the world to do so congrats.
-Acronym -
coool!
Powerful stuffs ennit. Some nice imagery, and some scary stuffs too :S
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woah. this almost mad me cry.
depress us much?just kidding. i like it. -
wow. im sorry i really dont know what to say. this almost brought me to tears. and i feel really weird telling you that, but i dont want you to underestimate this peice. your a really good poet. and i can really feel the sadness in your words. :] love it.
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