A mum i someone
You will always love
A mum is someone
Noone rises above
A mum is someone
Who always cares
A mum is someone
Who is always there
A mum is someone
Who is here to help
A mum is someone
Who tells how things
will be delt
A mum is someone
Who should always be loved
A mum is an angel
Sent from above
Author notes
Hope you like.... I tried my best
A contest entry
- Nursery Poem Rhymed for my expected: Loralye Rose Marie by Reniari.
450 points, ended February 10, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - mothers day poems by x Bright Eyes x.
525 points, ended March 15, 2007, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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thought you hit nail on head their explaining what a mum is liked your two line stanza set out good luck thanks for entering
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This is a fantastic 'Motherly' effort
I'm impressed with how well you are writing.
Keep the great work coming Darl...
AP Dad.
Jeffro
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