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When i'm with you


This world is dark
my world is gray
No where to go
Got nowhere to stay

I can feel the pain
Burning deep inside
I want to escape
I want to run and hide

I want to get lost
Inside your eyes

I want to find that place
Inside your soul

Becouse I know

When i'm with you
Everthing's alright
i can feel the warmth
I can see the light
When i'm with you
I'm not afraid
Of the dark
Or lay'n in my grave
Not when i'm with you
When i'm with you


I look into your eyes
I'm hypnotized
I see your soul
And i'm mezmarized

I'm in a perfect world
everything's ok
Don't want to hide
Or run away
Becouse i've got love
In my life
I've got you standing by mmy side

And i know

When i'm with you
Everything's alright
I can feel the warmth
I can see the light
When i'm with you
I can do no wrong
I don't have to be so strong
When i'm with you

When i'm holding you
in my arms
All i want to do
Is hold on
And i want to hold
Tighter
I just want to hold
Tighter
When i'm with you

When i'm with you

When i'm with you


Sam Brown
12/11/06

Author notes

When I wrote these lyrics I was expressing the way I wanted so badly to feel, I wanted to love, I wanted to be loved.

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  • Cynt
    February 26, 2007
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    this is very nice, i enjoyed reading it, although i dont know if it really fits the feel of this contest, try reading some of the other entries to get an idea of what i mean. but still a good write, thnx for entering!
    agape- cynt