You look at the world through those beautiful blue eyes
So innocent yet so wise.
You've been through so much
Been tested, and hurt, and pushed all your life
And in return you push people away...
I won't let you push me away
I know you need me as much as I need you.
Know that I will never leave your side,
I'm in love with you
You mean everything to me.
I see who you are on the inside
And everything about you makes me love you more.
Your spirit, your strength, your courage,
Your never ending sense of friendship.
How could I have gone one moment without you in my life.
I wanna be the one to make you happy,
The one who makes you think of everything
And nothing all at the same time,
The one that makes all the bad things in this world go away.
Let me need you, let me be there for you.
Let me wake up next to the most beautiful person I've ever met every morning
I won't promise my love is real...
I'll swear it
Until death do us part.
Author notes
I love Celine Dion! Seduces Me is one of my favorites... It is very slow and calm and at moments powerful and passionate... Good Stuff... Not sure if this is exactly what you wanted... lol It sorta turned into a wedding proposal... hahaha I feel kinda weird saying lovey things to myself... The guy would really have to know me and what I've been through, and sadly he would have to work really hard to break down my defense... but its true, if a guy said all this to me, I'd be head over heels!
A contest entry
- Love Poems. by OurxBeginning.
300 points, ended February 12, 2008, 49 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Comments
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Grrr this seriously made me cry. Hehe.. sorry. Reminds me of the way I was and the things that my love said to me. This really struck a chord inside of me. I enjoyed this, alot, very simple but says it all.
Thank you for entering and good luck.
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My Gods your a great poet. I love all your poems but this one especially you always have a way of getting right into my head. It's like you take everything Ive ever felt and turned it into a beautiful piece of artwork. Thank you for sharing such an amazing poem with the world. Please continue to write, Its as if you have every muse at your disposal.
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This is so true I can't believe i read this! It is great. It relates to me so much...
Your poem gave me butterflies it really touched me.
It says everything that this one person means to me. thank you
GRACE
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