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I am

I am a piller
Forged of Stone and Fire
My passion barely restrained

I am a contridiction
Steadfast as my father
But gazing longingly into the horizon

I am humbled
Battered and bruised by life's lessons
And still, I refuse to yield

I am anything
I am everything
I am whatever I choose to be

Today, and everyday
Now, and all my life
I choose to be Free

I am me
I am free

Why do we get to modify the comment question? Now I have to think of something to say in here. That creates stress, perhaps leading to panic. All this because I was forced to write a comment question.

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  • ramblin
    January 17, 2007

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    First of all, I love the determination and self confidence expressed within this poem. It carries a strong and meaningful message. I especially like these two stanzas:

    I am humbled
    Battered and bruised by life's lessons
    And still, I refuse to yield

    I am anything
    I am everything
    I am whatever I choose to be

    And being a cat lover, I think the picture with this is so cute, as well as being a good depiction of the poem Cats do what they want to do, and they'll fight when it's necessary.

    An exceptionally good piece, passionne

    ramblin