They ask
why have I fallen for you.
I laugh
and look away.
Forgive their ignorance...
You see
-my love-
most people are clueless
when it comes down to physics.
And
How could they know that
while
I am just a rotten apple
on that barren tree,
you are the earth,
and
love simply complies
to the laws of gravity?
A contest entry
- I heard of a man... by -ButterflyCuts-.
375 points, ended January 25, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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your newest one. very nice.
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Wow! This was seriously cool! A breath of fresh air ^o) seriously. I loved every part of it.
"most people are clueless
when it comes down to physics."
I like the cynical twist
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Hi Hana,
Hadn't read any of yours in while, thought I would stop by and see what you were up to, and wow! am I ever glad I did! This is just fantastic!! What a great job on this one! Simply amazing!! Keep that pen flowing.
Love ya my friend,
Nyetta
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very insightful! i bow in the presence of such depth!
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Hana this really a something else...I like the approach ...and how u concluded ur poem ...I think Newton would have been proud
hehe...
gr88 write !!
P.S: miss u !!! wayn hal ghaybe??!
*YoRgO*
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amazing imagery...Sir Isaac Newton and myself are ver proud
i just would like to add that comparing yourself to a rotten apple is the hugest wrongest medreh shou i've seen for now...hana you are a golden apple, like the one allmighty hercules risked his life to pick in the hesperides gardens...
love
serge
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You are the only ripe apple amongst those rotten others..
Amazingly beautiful
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oh my gosh this is great. So simple yet so perfect!!I love it my sweet sis!! But so ya know.. you are no rotten apple my dear.. you are the sweetest.. juiciest.. most perfect apple on the tree
Love
~Krys~
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"I am just a rotten apple
on that barren tree,"
never my hana.. u are so mch more!
perfectly amazing!
~rana~
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huh i studied physics once but urs is much cooler wonderful as usual heno
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wow!! what a gr8 mind !! i loved the conclusion!!!
gr8 gr8 gr8 !!!
me..
xxx
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Original
That's what I call and original way of thinking and explaning things. This was great. You know I love physics very much especially gravitation and stuff. And I really liked how you used science to explain your situation.
Elie
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