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Divine Kisses

Stars intertwine to heal the calloused moon,

He ceased all poisoning ink within my coiling flutter.

Replenished naked air in nature's swelling aroma,

Oh, I swoon through infinite waves on white crest.

Trundle illusion collects his faint respiration

Where I may cradle his undying breath.

To kiss cantlets of pink efflorescence;

His heart... blooms extractions of delicate flora.

Spherical elation will bestow us to excelling waterfalls

On utopias of cotton clovers, swaying in descending peace.

 

Author notes

*For the Hopeless Romantic contest* Salt Therapy is my screen name. This poem is about the spiritual connection that we have.


My fiance is my muse and everyday inspiration. When I kiss him to sleep he looks so peaceful, and I imagine us floating away together into a blissful oblivion...

*For the music, hope, love and all that jazz contest* I did a little bit of option 1 and 2. I hope this helps you spiritually and emotionally. You sound like a great girlfriend, and I am sure everything will turn out fine, no matter what.


I have entered this into 3 contests because each contest I entered wanted something that I could give deeply in this poem. It means a lot for even feedback alone! thank you!

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  • darell
    April 10, 2008
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    Exquisite!

    wow baby! you're an awesome poet.
    Your words knock me off my feet.
    I love the way you create an atmosphere
    charged with passion and romance.
    Thats the place I love to dwell.
    See you understand that real hot and
    sensual loving starts in the imagination
    of the mind. Loved this peice alot


  • PureRomance
    November 20, 2007

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    This is a very beautiful poem. I love it. Congrats on winning gold and HM in the previous contests you've entered this in. God bless you my fellow poet and good luck to you in this contest.

  • Acidanthra
    August 25, 2007
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    Amazing! This is a divine poem! I felt so at peace as I read this write. You definitely have a talent for words, expression, metaphors, and emotion. The imagination of the depth of love that you saw from the night sky has left my spirit high and free. Great write!

    Good luck in the contest!


  • Light of Icarus
    July 14, 2007

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    Very nice! You have a way with words that makes it so that if I closed my eyes, I could see what you were writing. Just wow..


  • Child of an Angel
    February 22, 2007

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    wow

    amazing flow and use of words, i loved this...such a beautiful job of displaying your emotions. such a graceful job. Im mesmerized by each write i read, keep the pen flowing..

    Always
    Emily


  • MidniteRae
    February 6, 2007

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    i really like this poem. it made me smile and think of my boyfriend. you did an awesome job, keep up the awesome work. thanks for entering and good luck in my contest.

  • AngieMae
    January 24, 2007

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    I really enjoyed all your unique adjectives. Phrases like "Trundle illusion" and "Spherical elation" really made this poem stand out. Thanks so much for entering!


    • Salt Therapy
      January 24, 2007
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      Thank you so much for hosting the contest! Good luck judging

  • phoenixonfire
    January 24, 2007

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    Excellent!!

    This is such a splendid write!! Absolutely warming and beautiful!! Just love the feel of the work!!

    Thanks for entering and good luck!!!

    Preets


  • freespirit51
    January 23, 2007

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    Wonderfully done. You have penned a sure winner her. Excellent images and super flow. Good luck in the contest. Sounds like gold to me,.


  • One Eunique Pixie
    January 17, 2007

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    liked it

    i really liked the flow of this poem, and the wording kinda made me feel like i was floating, but i did not understand waht was being said. i think i got that you were hurt by something and something else was healing you in a way...idk! but i liked it anyway...which is saying alot if i don't get the message but would still read it again. Keep up the great work. Love and Peace, Charlene


  • JoyfulWriter
    January 17, 2007

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    Such a beautiful and inspirational piece...flowed so beautifully and proved to be a pleasure to read....great job! Keep the ink flowing...smiles, terry


  • sweetpearl
    January 17, 2007

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    "Oh, I swoon through infinite waves on white crest"

    --this is my favourite line. I love using "oh" and seeing it in other poetry as well. This seemed very romantic and light like a dream sequence. It's like delicate beauty. Excellent use of words as well.


  • BrightEyes-
    January 17, 2007

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    A very nice write. Full of beautiful phrases and words and striking imagery. You have a lovely command of language that really adds to your poetry. Good luck in the contest!

    -mandy


  • Mechanical Angel
    January 17, 2007

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    I like your usage of metaphors--white clouds I'm assuming may be pillows? Lovely usage of words! I had to go back and read through it again because it still felt a bit advanced for me... but I understand it all now, after a second read. Nice job! I love your flow and your format -- simple, which is the opposite of love. Love is hard, and it's those precious moments that get us through it all. Your last three lines are my favorite.

    Mech


    • Salt Therapy
      January 17, 2007
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      Thank you hun, that means a lot to me. yes, they can be pillows, or anything you interpret it to be. My whole reason for writing other then my environmental surroundings is to leave a mystery in the reader, to have them go back and read again, just like you said. Thank you so much, you made my day. I'm going to add you to my favorites


  • TallDrinkofWater
    January 17, 2007

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    Very Good

    It good to have a muse that enspires one so. To be able to bring such beautiful wordsout of you, means it is special. Write on Poet


  • penman gold member
    January 17, 2007

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    Unfair

    Now this is totally unfair. At least to the rest of us for you to have such incredible experiences and ALSO have the talent to put it in a poem with such depth, passion and intensity.

    This poem is itself like one long, totally consuming kiss. What artistry, what magic. Ooooh, is the only word that comes to mind.


    • Salt Therapy
      January 17, 2007
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      and I do have my book online, so at least that's something! I'm gonna make another soon ^_^


    • Salt Therapy
      January 17, 2007
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      thank you! I sent this to abovegroundtesting.com for their magazine... cinnarry from allpoetry told me to go there, and talked about some cool book fairs in california in april that publish people all the time each year. I'll keep you posted within the next few months on what happens!

  • Eusebius
    January 17, 2007

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    bravo

    wistful and dreamlike with some marvelous poetic phrases...I liked it muchly, indeed! bravo ...bravo...bravo!!

  • 12-gaugegunner
    January 17, 2007

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    This is so beautiful, sweet, touching. It makes me think of how I feel about MY significant other. I love reading this - it's warm and loving. Nice, lovely, poem.


  • W B Burkholder
    January 17, 2007

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    Quite romantic nd beautiful, what a lovley piece of writing, enjoyable and tends to make da heart go pitter patter, well done loved it


  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    January 17, 2007

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    I loved the first two lines, and the rest of the poem merely paled in comparison. For doesn't the kiss of a star heal the wounds the moon has come to live with. Beauty in it's purest form
    Faerie

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