Dear Father save me
From being naive
From seeking refuge
From having to leave
Dear God forgive me
Let me start anew
Let the joy remain
Let troubles be few
Dear Master guide me
As I walk with You
As I search Your light
As I’m feeling blue
Dear Lord renew me
May I sing your praise
May I feel love
May I leave my maze
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From being naive
From seeking refuge
From having to leave
Dear God forgive me
Let me start anew
Let the joy remain
Let troubles be few
Dear Master guide me
As I walk with You
As I search Your light
As I’m feeling blue
Dear Lord renew me
May I sing your praise
May I feel love
May I leave my maze
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excellent
I too once tried these thoughts but not the words. I have a problem myself of trying to do things my way when I know I can't and I appreciate this piece you left us to read. If only I could believe that I could be renewed maybe only then would I feel a calm come over me. I am glad to have read a writing of yours once again. Take care my dear friend and know you are blessed.

Darr

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The path towards divinity:
Save, forgive, guide, renew ... And then joy, and love and life and growth! and in the end you will leave your maze ... Believe!
Love
Myra

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a very nice poem, i liked the rhymescheme especially, good luck in the contest



