Here in my heart you will always hold a place
A love like yours, I would never try to replace
Please believe me when I tell you that I do
Place your hand in mine and believe in me, when I tell you that I love you
You mean everything in the world to me, darling can't you see?
Vanish not from my life, spend the rest of yours with me
Another day without you would tear my world apart
Let me show you how much I care, give us a chance to start
Even though you've had a rough past, I know that I can make it right
Never fear the man that I am, you will always be first in my life
Tell me that you feel the same way, all I want is to see you smile
I would walk the world to be by your side, even if it's just for a while
Next to me is where I want you to be, hold me close and never let go
Every beat of my heart I am going to prove to you, just how much I love you so
Sign your name across my heart as I sign mine across yours
Day after day and night after night, I will give you all that I have in store
A love like ours I will never take for granted nor will I ever hurt you so
You will always have the very best of my love and together we will grow
Author notes
Friends, I thank you for your time and Comments on this piece. However, please do not add my name to your comments due to the contest rules. Thank you very much!
A contest entry
- Valentine Day by Lisa..
675 points, ended February 3, 15 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Happy Valentine's Day!! by Cynthia Gaines.
2100 points, ended February 20, 49 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Beautifully romantic!!
Thank you for sharing your muse's tender-hearted and lovely poem!! 
I'm wishing you all the best in the contest!! Take care. 
Peace, xx Cyn xx 
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my dear friend the background is awe striking and the write ....... well lets just say im writing threu taers flowing from my soull. each line speaks of a true and profound love that lately i only dream of - well done and many blessings always xxx hugs my dear friend may your valentines day be filled with love. xxx
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wow that realy good keep up the good work and good luck
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okay without even reading this one I like the background. Caught my attention
Now onto what I think of the poem. It is a sweet write from someone who wants to tell the person that they care for that they are first in their life. That there is hope that this love should feel the same way.
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Very nice poem.
i like the way it was written. very unique and original. thanks for entering the contest and the best of luck to you. kassie. -
thank you for entering with this lovely write, a very descriptive and love filled poem good luck in the contests
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What wonderful feelings and emotions you have expressed! I hope you have someone to give this too. It is so beautiful. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Jeannie
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Extremely romantic, well done, intense as well which I like. Best of luck.
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This is a beautiful write of true to heart feelings. Whoever the love in your life is should be honored when she reads this.
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you never fail to do this to me. i am rarely on here but i always can count on you to make me smile when i read your words. i think you have made it a mission to make me believe in love and romance again. hmmmm? this is great. thank you for giving me a much needed smile. viyanna rosemarie
ps--your name and pic are displayed so it is difficult not to know who wrote this.
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PRETTY
YOU HAVE DONE A GREAT JOB OFFERING EXACTLY WHAT THE CONTEST WANTED. THIS IS A SPECIAL PENNING FOR SOMEONE SPECIAL. I REALLY LIKE IT!
POETDONTKNOWIT -
My absolute favorite part:
"Vanish not from my life, spend the rest of yours with me
Another day without you would tear my world apart"
Some parts were very simply stated, and others were beautiful and poetic. Such a way with words and beautiful imagery. Very nice write.
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Such a romantic poem, I loved it from the beginning to the end. Wonderful piece and all the best in the contest!
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This is a lovely poem that you have written for valentines day for that somebody special in your life, your rhythm and rhyme flowed beautifully throughout the entire poem good luck in my contest
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A most beautiful statement of love dear poet, Bella
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