His words are so tantalizingly smooth
that it sends shivers down
and my heart secretly whispers
these hushed words …..
that he is mine— Forever
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In my dreams
I can feel …..
his embraces so passionately warm
engulfing me with fervor,
his kiss
drowns my sorrow
his touch
awakens the passion within me
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His short poetic verses are so enticingly deep
i constantly yearn for more
dreams of his touch and voice in my sleep
with him; i am not alone anymore
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His caresses ever-so tender
i draw in deep gasps and i shiver
my love; my heart; my soul; take me away
and with his burning with ardor, I surrender
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In my dreams his whispers
Are blazingly low
releasing burning sensations
my need for his touches steadily grow
he is my greatest and unbreakable temptation
when we lay in satin sheets
in my land of fantasy
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I can feel his breath hot upon my skin
But to feel such passion must be a sin
For I am simply a fallen angel
Forbidden to be loved
~~~~~~~~~
Yet his romantic verses does things to me
that I can no longer describe
these emotions are so strong
and I'm afraid to give in to them
for I fear to be alone once again
when this time comes to an end
In a list
A contest entry
- Invite Only; Me on Their List by Ted E Bare.
300 points, ended January 3, 2008, 79 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Like a song filled with a beautiful melody and loving words, your write is harmoneous to the heart and soul for lovers every where. I want to thank you for entering my "Invite Only; Me On Their List" contest.
Ted E
PS: Once I have commented on all of your entries, then I will reread them all and choose the one that will be brought forward for being selected as Gold, Silver, Bronze or HM.
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The style is wonderious.
Bundles of thoughts trailing in and out like a ocean's waves. Powerfully, simplicilly written.
It has me smileing and yearning for my love
Beautiful
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this poem is so incredible. its written so well and its past beautiful, great great great write!!!!
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beautiful
The imagery in this beautiful poem really captured my imagination... I love it! This must be one of my favorite parts:
"I can feel his breath hot upon my skin
But to feel such passion must be a sin
For I am simply a fallen angel
Forbidden to be loved "
Great job! Thank you submitting my contest with this romantic poem =)
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thanks for the fantistic reply....
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Beautiful-
Just love this verse You have penned Sweetness
and what a picture to compliment
The words bring forth images and heighten the senses
which stimulate the Mind to embrace Your words...
Here is a link in which one of my fav movies is
captured within this music video..
and also the song which I think compliments the picture:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EGdHNsNjzA8
Best wishes to You in the contest
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Well, you certainly gave the host of the contest what they asked for. This piece is very romantic, beautifully written, and passionate. Great poem, Sweetie. Love, Gramma
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