I'm so happy,
Today I found my drugs,
They were in the couch.
Now I can get excited,
Now show me your panties,
I dont care I know im a perv.
I'm so messed up,
I cut off the legs of a pretty girl.
I'm so tiered,
Four rounds and thinking about one more,
Thats a sign my blue pills work.
I'm so evil,
I plucked a girl until she was bald.
I'm so high,
I went to heaven,
Got bored and went to hell
I'm so nice,
I cut her neck so slowly she seemed to enjoy it.
Author notes
I don't have much to say about this one...
A contest entry
- FILL ME WITH DARKNESS! by okadadokie.
450 points, ended February 2, 2007, 9 entries
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this is really twisted...I loved it
"I'm so happy,
Today I found my drugs,
They were in the couch."
That reminds me of myself back in the day...I think thats why I like this poem so much!!
Ashlee
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That was awesome, I'm really intrigued by it; it's twisted & has a perverted little nitch in it. Congrats.
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Haha
Sick poem it's great. Awesome job. I really like the way you put it all.
A MURDEROUS LAMENT <\33 -
Wicked Sweet. there's nothing like a good dark poem to make my day look brighter. Thank you. I like the weird thing you got going with this poem. Good luck.
~Oka -
hmmm.... definitly dark- but i like it-your wording says a lot and the imagery is there. thanx for entering and good luck!!
*Abused
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i really really liked this. It reminds me of someone I know. I bet so many people think like this (or have done shit like this) that we don't even know about. I can't really put my finger on what I liked so much (so much for great input) but dammit, I liked it. :]
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Well this is definatly twisted in a sense. Not as much dark as I wanted but still pretty good. Sorta freaky in a way. I like that. Well done. Good luck.
~Oka
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nice
slightly sick and twisted, while seeming on the cheery side.... enjoy the trip honey. i hope it doesn't let you down too hard....
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This write gave me the chills.
Certain points it started to stray away from the craziness, but then it jumped right back in. Simply awesome.
You should be proud!
~SweetAmber~
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scary... well it is... but it's totaly a great write. I could get chills reading this... maybe I did and just don't remember... It's frightening, just the thought of most of the lines... I think it could make people wan to hide.
"I'm so high,
I went to heaven,
Got bored and went to hell"
Those lines are awesome. It fits and, the sound of it together with the other stansas works so well.
The beginning reminds me off the Nirvana song... you know... "...today I found my friends...". But this is a different story.
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