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The glass on the floor

The glass on the floor spilled the red wine
A crimson stain that she doesn’t care about
Because he is holding her for the first time
In his arms everything slips away

As his fingers trace her spine giving her goose bumps
Her mouth soft on his, giving him sweet kisses
His hand runs free over her stomach moving down
She shivers and nibbles on his ear making him shiver with her

He directs her to the bed and makes her still with a look
The look he gave her told her everything she was his
She knew he was going to do with her what he pleased
And there was nothing she could do not that she would do anything

He starts at her head and kisses her deeply
Making his way down with her fingers in his hair
He tugs and pulls on her full breasts
Moving down he kisses her stomach listening to her soft whispering moans

He kisses down one leg and up the other
Sitting back watching his love plead with him
He gives her another look
She knows this one all too well…”wait”

They share a deep longing kiss as he slips a finger in her
She gasps in the mists of the kiss as she was not expecting this
He moves his finger in her to make her shiver
She lets out a soft moan to his ears

He slips another finger in her
Moving in and out her hips start to move with him
He slowly removes his fingers and sucks on them watching her calm herself
As he sees she has calmed he slips three in her now making her moans grow

Finally tired of waiting himself he plunges himself into her
Gulping air as she is surprised by this action she moves her hips with his
  He pushes hard in her making her back arch as she cums with him in her
He lets his juices flow in her as she shudders anew with this

Laying in each others arms 
Kissing the moments away
The glass on the floor spilled the red wine
A crimson stain that she doesn’t care about

Author notes

pardon my first try....be gentle but truthful ok ty for reading

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  • This Doesnt Hurt
    April 10, 2007

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    you did an amazing job the imagry is perfect...you really did deserve the gold trophy!! I love how the ending and beging are the same...Good job!!! ♥ Ashlee


  • GuardianPhoenix7289
    February 5, 2007
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    Good job!!!

    I have no reason to disagree with you getting the gold trophy! You did a fabulous job!!! Definitely awe inspiring and got me turned on!
    Very nice job I liked it! You painted the picture OH so well!!! Keep up the good work!

  • the oleander
    February 1, 2007
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    Sexy

    wow, very, very, good. I realy liked this poem, and I like how it was like a story, a very well written story, I like you style and think you are very talented, keep up the good work! *smiles* hope to keep in touch!


  • JustDavey
    January 17, 2007
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    shnikey Pixie, well done for a first try. good luck in the contest.

    Judge David