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Kat Tales

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How does one escape the comfortable ...

that stuffy little room in the middle of a house

full of strange familars

I feel like I'm walking through a field of shadows

reinacting battles of life and death

over and over and over ... again

in someone else's skin

Do I believe what I see or only what I felt

rough against the skin like the tongue of a cat

I lay by the fire today with my stolen moments

crackling with the heat of a forbidden panic


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A weird day ...

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  • Tangled Angle
    January 21, 2007
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    Wow.


  • misselaineous
    January 17, 2007

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    ok - how did i miss thsi one? did you sneak three in one night when i wasn't looking?
    love it love it!
    CONGRATULATIONS!!!
    elaine


  • Providence
    January 17, 2007

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    this is very very good. Very cat like. Seemingly cool on the outside, they can remain aloof and suspicious.

    I know several people like that too!

    Great write!
    Marianne

  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    January 17, 2007
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    Freakin' brilliant.


  • Heart Sutra
    January 16, 2007

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    Perfect. I love this. Fully of reality, emotions, dreams and questions. This is real life. I love poetry like this.

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