Platinum tendrils
sprawled across satin sheets.
Ripe and luscious,
the fruit of desire.
A gift to the Gods.
Six hands,
bound by leather
as fingers twine in
agonizing anticipation.
Shadows dance playfully
against the ceiling,
produced by the light
of a single flickering candle.
A subtle cough
confirms his presence
as each twitch slightly
while thoughts of
what is to be sink into
their minds.
His smile,
though unseen,
tells all.
Beads of sweat arise
as soft caresses trail
along silken flesh.
Fiery tingles with every touch,
followed by the gentle
striking of his tongue.
Rippling waves course
from one to the other.
His mouth paying homage
to the valley of seduction;
each hand coaxing euphoria
on either side.
Three bodies,
writhing under his demand;
brought to the brink
of orgasmic heaven
time and again.
Their gasps echo
the air;
he knows it won't be long.
His only decision-
which beauty to drink first.
And he smiles again,
knowing the night has only
just begun.
Author notes
Left it open for the imagination.
Ok the ladies...will take a stab and say they are Atomic Kitten.
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In a list
A contest entry
- Quadsome...(3 lovely Ladies and you!!) by Maddogk.
710 points, ended February 3, 2007, 4 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very Touching!
Oh how I miss reading your poetry. I never fail to amaze me with the endless flow of beautfully written poetry. Having a vast vocabulary certainly adds the quality and impact I feel moving through the line. Damn that was a sexy write! Miss ya, Rhon
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Thanks Rhon, appreciate your comments hun. I feel so lax about writing lately, but I seem to be having so much trouble sparking ideas in my mind. Just returned this morning from a tropical weekend, hopefully it will help. But what I got to come home to...rain!
Storm
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Oh yeah the thunder is booming and the lightening is flashing!! Storm has done it again. Hot and steamy, certainly got the blood pumping. Dayum good visuals! Good luck in the contest.
Jeannie
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Thank you Jeannie. Appreciate the comments and glad you liked.
Storm
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CONGRATULATIONS...
YOU ARE THE WINNER OF THE 100 BONUS POINTS..
Good guess....
Jeffro -
This is a wonderful poem, Thank you for entering, Autumn. I found it quite image producing, and very effective at getting the mind working.
Thanks and good luck...
Jeffro
PS
You had better contact me via IM, We need to chat....
Great job here.
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Oooh my! How awesomely sensual this is! You go, girl! All the best to you, sweetie!
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Ah, the valley of seduction. Makes my mouth water. You have ignited my imagination again (not to say my dirty mind). A very good write. The flow was perfect. The title lured me in, but the words captured me heart and soul. Good luck. ~~~James
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Wow! Very sensual, Autumn. Nice thing to read first thing at work. lol Thanks for the coffee!
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