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white snow from christimas
delayed departure til may
new wind direction

A contest entry

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  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    January 23, 2007

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    Isn't that always the way.... snow is so beautiful but it puts so much on hold... fabulous job here

    Karen


  • Anjole-Of-The-Artz
    January 20, 2007

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    I LOVE CHRISTMAS

    Snow has to be one of the best things to see the beauty of flakes falling and that none are alike it reminds me of humans in the world and us as "God" shaping them and bringing them angels Bravo <3


  • nell
    January 19, 2007

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    your poem tells such a story in just three little lines. great use of words. good luck in the contest

    shanelle


  • NoWayJo
    January 18, 2007
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    Much like Ned's comments, I too like the "new wind direction" line of this haiku very much...and I hope the snow we're supposed to get tonight in the northeastern U.S. disappears well-before May!

    Thank you for this entry to the contest!

    Jo

  • dillpickle62
    January 18, 2007

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    New wind direction

    I like the part of new wind direction. The direction towards spring. My favorite time of year. Thank-you for sharing. Ned-

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